[Report This]Date: March 15 2023 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 8 - An unforgettable Reunion
This is a pretty good story, dude. I like how Emma suddenly gave in to the demon who was telling her to treat Jack like an object instead of the human he is. Please continue this story.
Date: December 27 2022 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrinking potion
Very cozy feeling to this chapter. Am wondering where this story is headed, I’m guessing we’ll be getting more into the actual fetish stuff or story/character dynamics soon.
Author's Response:
Hi, glad you liked the first chapters, you'll definitely find more in the following ones
Date: November 27 2022 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrinking potion
A really good story and loving it so far can’t wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're enjoying it.
Hopefully it should be updated weekly for the meanwhile
[Report This]Date: November 22 2022 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Torture week - Day three
One of my favorite stories on the site, great stuff! I love Caroline, so ambivalently evil!
Author's Response:
Such high praise! I'm not worthy.
Glad you enjoy it so much, hoping to do a chapter a week from now, so keep an eye out.
[Report This]Date: November 19 2022 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Torture week - Day three
Just discovered this story and it makes me very curious how things develop. What will happen when Emma saves him from Caroline and what will happen to their friendship? Might there be interaction between the three of them? I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
So glad you like it. I won't be giving anything away but keep checking back over the coming weeks for additions to the story.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2022 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Caroline.
Wow just discovered this story. Amazing writing hope it continues.
Author's Response:
It will be! Recently returned and will be writing more. Glad you like it 😊
Date: December 29 2021 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrinking potion
I love this story cant wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Hi glad you like it. Definitely lots more to come.
Date: December 09 2021 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Carrienapped.
I cannot emphasize my excitement for more. Just one criticism add more detail from his perspective if possible.
Author's Response:
Hi, thank you for the glowing review. I thought I would add less in the previous chapter to emphasize Caroline, but the next one was going to be from Jacks again to not give too much away. I hope the next chapter won't disappoint!
[Report This]Date: December 09 2021 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shrinking potion
Great third chapter, good pace and writing. Hope Caroline keeps him for longer.
Author's Response:
Hi, thank you for the great review, glad you liked it! I'm sure you'll enjoy Chapter 4 and we're the story will continue when uploaded.
Date: December 03 2021 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Caroline.
Great set up. It will be interesting to see if Emma will have a sweet relationship with Jack where they learn to please each other in their new lives. Or will Emma be tempted by the pleasure and have Jack become more of her toy.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it so far, I hope to upload a chapter each week (at minimum) so you should find out how everything unfolds soon.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it so far, I hope to upload a chapter each week (at minimum) so you should find out how everything unfolds soon.