Date: August 12 2012 7:47 AM Title: Prologue
I realise I'm way late again but you have to stop writing these awesome -civilation- stories and stopping them.
Good stuff man, see you on the gridiron this fall.
Date: March 06 2009 5:50 PM Title: Three: History
If you're interested, the book I read this in is called PERFECT VICTIM: THE TRUE STORY OF "THE GIRL IN THE BOX" by Wensley Clarkson.*
*The DA who successfully prosecuted the criminal duo.
[Report This]Date: March 06 2009 5:46 PM Title: Three: History
I agree that, in most cases, the Bad People of the world result from nurture (or, lack thereof) rather than nature.
HOWEVER...
...most rules have exceptions. Case in point? The sadistic sociopath, and his equall bad wife, who kidnapped a young girl hitchhiker as their prisoner-cum-slave for seven years!
The husband came from a good home. His parents were ardent church-goers who didn't abuse alcohol, illegal drugs, or their own kids. Nor was this kid, in particular, ever abused physically or otherwise) by other relatives or family friends. Nor did he suffer any head injury or neurlogical disease that might alter the moral judgement center of his brain.
For lack of a better term, he was apparently JUST BORN BAD!
He and his wife were eventually arrested, tried, convicted, and imprisoned, of course. And, their captive freed. But, the poor girl was naturally never the same again.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2009 10:13 PM Title: Two: Enlightenment
If that two minutes was so neglible, why didn't she use that time to call a professional tech-support service?
I'll tell you why: same as I said in my last review. Jamie is an over-indulged bratty princess, and probably always was. Even before she got her shrink ray.
Author's Response: well the computer she honestly doent have the know how and matt is a trained computer tech. However,s he is a bratty princess.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2009 3:38 PM Title: Prologue
Oh, yeah! I'm definitely tuning in for chapter 2.
Author's Response: sweet, but hte real question is will you tune in for chapter three
[Report This]Date: February 23 2009 8:41 AM Title: One: Tech Support
Granted, she can call him anything she wants, now that's he been shrunk. But even so, from my pov, Jamie and Nikki are the inconsiderate asses! The latter, for "volunteering" her brother's services behind his back. And, the former, for not taking "no' for an answer!*
*Which she probably couldn't stand doing, even before she gained the power to shrink people. Can you say "over-indulged bratty princess?"
Author's Response: yes i can, im glad my chacterizaitons are picked up nice and easy.