Date: August 28 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is exceptional!
It is both well written and a creative exploration of shrinking, and does a good job of showing the world (and in particular, Eve) at various perspectives. It also examines the protagonist's powerlessness and fragility while staying a true gentle story. Hopefully, we will see more from this author.
Great concepts and great writing make this a superb story - read it immediately!
Author's Response: Hi, thank you for the feedback, Azure! I am planning on continuing this story soon.
Date: November 20 2009 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
You HAVE to finish this story, you can't leave us hanging like this! I really loved your story "Giantess Jen and I". You have a lot of talent and i would really hate to see you not use it to its full potential.
Are you ever going to write stories again?
Author's Response: Hi, sorry fir the kate response (two years later!) I will do my best to finish these stories up, and I have a few more ideas, just need more discipline in writting. Thank you or the feedback!
Date: September 14 2009 9:19 AM Title: an unexpected visitor
They were briefly in danger of being overtaken by a real nag. But, she's dropped back behind.
Date: September 14 2009 8:41 AM Title: shrink on
And, they complete the first turn!
Date: September 14 2009 8:40 AM Title: Contestant number 1
They started off neck and neck. But, now, he's down to her shoulder.
Date: September 14 2009 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
And, they're off!
Date: February 07 2009 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
So far an excellent little read. You've done some great characters, and they are interesting. Still wish for some unaware vore/guy getting made into a sandwich orburger and nearly eaten, but so far, a good way to pass the time.
Author's Response: Hmm I hadn't thought about any unaware stuff for this one am definitely up for exploring that alley sometime in the future. I do have some interesting ideas for the next chapters I hope you'll enjoy. thanks!