[Report This]Date: November 14 2021 8:45 PM Title: Ch 2 - Meeting the Mother
Wow, Laura is amazing! I just love her loving yet naughty behavior. While Jade seems to more on the teasing type, Laura seems a lot more forward and more appealing to me.
I think my favorite line was “I’ll give you back to Jade once she wakes up, but if she doesn’t, then I’ll hold onto you until morning”.
I love dialogue like this, especially at the end of chapters because while the chapter may end, the fun for the characters continue for a long time and it just leaves me imagining all the fun activities that they will have.
Also, I love your description of Laura. First off, great name. About every Laura I’ve read on this site was awesome, so I can’t help but feel excited seeing a giantess named Laura. Also, I like how Laura is taller and more fit than Jade. Kinda feels like Laura is an upgraded giantess, haha!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 05 2021 7:21 PM Title: Ch 1 - Jade's Halloween
Superb short story! Just enough detail to get a feel for the characters and their past relationship and then it's dwindling time.
Half-expected the story to have shrink to near-nothingness while wedged under her toe, before revealing that he had dreamed that outcome and in fact had reached a minimum size.
Good luck with your commissions!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
This won't be the last commission story I write with this commissioner's characters, so look forward to that.