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Reviewer: robbo4life Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

nice story really needs an ending though

Reviewer: ramses Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

hoping there's more to come

Reviewer: Mrscifi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

is that it?

Reviewer: nic2800 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2009 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the salt in this story. Please keep going.

Reviewer: butterstick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2009 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey GREAT story. I could see the character and the area without the use of tons and tons of descriptions and more importantly the main character was very characterized, her emotions and ideas of power fit her incredibly well along with the duality of being a stripper and thus usually at the pleasure of others. So I find this story to be a very good force of opposites in creating a compelling villian that is both attractive but also at the same time very attractive in ideas and feelings. I hope you continue the story ASAP. It's GREAT. Are you going to continue it? 

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