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Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2021 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done! There was a lot of variety to it, and you added just the right level of detail to keep it engaging throughout. Big Chie is pretty great too!



Author's Response:

Haha! Glad you enjoyed, I tried to mix it up a bit but stick to the 2 focuses the requester gave. Big fan of Chie/Persona so this one was particularly fun.

Reviewer: A Little Bit of Everything Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2021 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story! I love Chie and your descriptions of her sweaty feet were perfect, especially when the drops of sweat were falling on the shrunken character. The ending was very nice too.



Author's Response: Had to do those kung-fu tomboy toes justice. I couldn't resist the intense under toe sauna style scene. I'm glad you enjoyed!

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