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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2021 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: Processing Phase

Wow! This is super interesting!

I love these kind of experiments where the person in control follows protocol, but also has her own agenda. 

I can't wait to see what Ida does with him next or if she meets even other criminals. 

Maybe there might be someone who accidentally got sent her to be an experiment. Or maybe one of these criminals is someone she knows personally. 

Lots of possibilities here and I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Haha, oh don't worry, you'll be quite pleased with where it goes from the sounds of it. I plan to have other stories taking place on this Island, and around this Academy/Facility area as well.

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2021 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Processing Phase

Great chapter. I love the way you explain the technology and the characters are very interesting. There aren't enough stories like this one. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I wanted to play around with some fun classic themes and do a bit of a character and area focused twist on the "shrinking facility" scenario.

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