Date: May 12 2022 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: Computer Problems
I am enjoying the story greatly, it's hard to find a writer that does crushing so well, usually they just leave it at a vague pop.
I hope we get to see some more of Eve
Author's Response:
Nice, I'm glad to hear you're enjoying. Going for a real sci-fi/horror element in this one with the mostly unaware graphic scenes, think a bit like a creature feature/slasher flick- but the monster is uhh well in this case a normal sized woman. XD.
We'll be seeing more of Eve throughout the next chapter to finish off her introduction and in some later scenes planned with Axci and her together. ;D
[Report This]Date: November 02 2021 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Computer Problems
As the commissioner. I'm down for this! Mini-Materia, fantastic job on all the chapters. Look forward to chapter 4!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2021 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Computer Problems
Love chapter 3. I started reading when i saw it updated and im really loving the juicy interactions. The vore was a welcome suprise and i really enjoyed it when you cut back to Cheryls perspective inside Axci. It would also be really cool to submit a tiny oc to this story to end up at Axcis mercy in a situation if the original commissioner was willing.
Author's Response:
That's actually a super cool idea that I would totally be down to work in, in-between "scenes" -the commissioner and I are on good terms and they'd be open to throwing in some random small people for fun as the shrunken victims. (I've been coming up with them off the top of my head so far for the sake of the scene, and there are at least 2 more planned scenes/areas for the story.
I'll talk to the commissioner and see what we can drum up as far as how to work that into the overall story. Maybe a Twitter post where people can submit mundane human OC's that fit the story or such in the near future? There's lots more of this story/character planned so I'm sure I could figure something for that. ;D