Date: November 12 2021 8:06 PM Title: Arto
I really liked this story, it has an amazing concept. Just wondering what is the general size of humans in this world? Since they are thousands of times smaller I would assume around 0.3mm?
Author's Response:
I'm sorry that my response is so late! I've been really backed up with unfortunate mishaps in real life. I have not abandoned it though, and hope to resume writing very soon! And I hope people would still like to see my story continued, as well! (I had chapters 4 and 5 written, just not yet posted). Thank you so much for your compliment!! To answer your question... if I included a line at some point calling them thousands of times smaller, it was likely in reference to their body mass, not their physical height! At (a relative) 0.3mm, it would sadly be very difficult for an Arpakie to be able to observe human facial expressions! As such, humans are roughly around a humble 2 cm when compared to Arpakies.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2021 12:53 AM Title: Preface
I like the preface, as you offered a concise clarification of the scope and intention of the story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad the synopsis hit well! The main difficulty for me was keeping it short enough as not to turn people away, but verbose enough to include the setup, scope, intention etc.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2021 7:46 PM Title: Preface
I had the pleasure of reading an early copy of this story for editing and review. I must say that I adore the story and worldbuilding. There is so much here to explore with the Arpakies and characters that I really want to see more in this universe. I think that for more emotional impact (and more smut), a longer story needs to be told. I'm excited to see where this one will go, and I'm happy to have been given a chance to add my own input prior to the release. You have a good grasp of storywriting, and I think the scene with Arto is well done. I will be looking forward to more chapters, and I'm always willing to chip in my two cents if you'd like a review.
Keep it up, the possibilities you have here are endless and I'm sure you will bring some interesting perspectives to the genre.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your comprehensive critique and admiration! I hope I can continue to meet expectations, and turn this story into something really special!