Reviewer: WhydoIhave Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2021 7:59 AM Title: Aperture Science

Hey great to know someone else likes story and interactions between a tiny person and a giantess rather than the sexy part of this fetish. I mean I like reading smut, but a good story will make me come back to reread it all over again. Writes like Darien Fawkes, Nostory, and others out there that have a good mixture of story and a bit of the sexy stuff to make the story worth the read. It is mostly why I love reading gentle stories, there isn't just 1-thousands of people dying for no reason. I second the review above mine. It is good to spice up the story with some moments of fluff. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

The fluff will be more prominent towards the end, but yeah, it's something I should've considered a little more. I guess the other problem is my lack of confidence in taking stuff in that direction - it just isn't something I've practiced much, and I'm always terrified of the story coming to a halt.. If I do another story, I'll definitely put some effort into integrating the fluff into plot/character development.

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2021 2:54 PM Title: Aperture Science

I love it so far. While it's not "sexy", it's written well. On this site it feels like most stories tend to lean towards all sexy and no story haha. I'd say my only criticism is that some light fetish stuff can be inserted here and there while still maintaining a really good narrative that's believable.

While this story is finished as you said, an example that could be done here might be glados sticking Dean in chells boot while she's knocked out as a way to make her feel bad for harming him, or perhaps some interaction while she's sleeping or him falling into her jumpsuit. Tiny people are of course always in some inherent danger around giants. 

Regardless, the story is good and I look forward to upcoming chapters 

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review

 

I definitely could've made Dean's size a bigger factor... which seems pretty obvious in hindsight as a gts story. I will say it focuses a little more on that as the story progresses, but I am questioning how well I worked those essentials into the narrative now that you bring them up. Even as I release these chapters, it's hitting me a little how much this is basically an adventure story with a giantess backdrop.

 

I'm glad you're enjoying it, and there're still plenty of twists and turns to come! Hopefully If it ever comes, hopefully I can go into my next story a little wiser.