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Reviewer: ikkle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2021 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Aigle pushes my buttons for very particular reasons, but beyond that there's a few things I really like about this story.

 

A: The gradual growth, it's nice to see her at varying levels of interaction with the humans.

B: You do a good job introducing us to the concepts of this world, familiar enough to anyone who reads fantasy, without burying us in "As you know" exposition.

C: Aigle's reasons for destroying the city, already somewhat minor and capricious at the beginning, only became more so when her motive is revealed near the end.

D: On the one hand I know she didn't really care, but it might have been good to have Cornia as a survivor semi-intentionally, otherwise her message at the end seems a little ditzy on her part.

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2021 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was a fun read for a Saturday night! Excellent work, super hot.

Reviewer: SirFarty Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2021 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I always like it when giants attack armies!

Could you add "giantess" to your tags, please?

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