[Report This]Date: May 15 2023 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pantheress Solitaire
Anything new coming down the pike? You’re such a good writer!
Author's Response:
Thanks johnsmith! Sorry for the delay in response, I don't come on here that regularly since finishing J&J. I don't have anything upcoming unfortunately either, altough I am keen on writing something again.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2022 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 74: Epilogue: My World
I wish the vet could have showed up one last time.
Author's Response: In retrospect I didn't anticipate how much love there would be for the vet content.
Date: October 28 2022 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 71: Night In
No safer chaperones for a shrunken man's bachelor party than a pair of maternal lesbians. ;-)
Author's Response:
Yeah, Darcy is probably one of the more 'wholesome' characters in the whole story, and balances out all the 'bad girls'. Samantha might be more complicated. She definitely cares for Jerry but she still has feelings for him that are not so 'maternal'.
Date: October 28 2022 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 72: Screwing Around
Oh, yeah, Jen. There's a better way, alright. But, it would entail you re-enlarging Jerry back to his original normal height!
Author's Response:
But she wouldn't necessarily consider that 'better' by her definition!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2022 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 69: Vet Exam
Another vet chapter and it's as enjoyable as always.
I wonder if Jerry will ever ask Jen why she's cool with the Vet having her way with Jerry.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm not sure; I mean Jerry is a non-confrontational sort of person and resolves to not look weak in front of Jennifer. Which tends to get him into problems but that's habit.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 70: Blast from the Past
Scott's not entirely wrong. I still strongly suspect that second wormhole experiment was sabotaged by Jennifer in some way. Precisely because she liked the new power dynamic in her and Jerry's relationship.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was. It's depicted unclearly in the chapter because it's from Jerry's POV but Jen reached in and pulled him out once he returned to mouse size. She prefers the power dynamic with him being small, but she is also terrified of the machine possibly hurting Jerry and wanted to pull him out as quickly as possible.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 69: Vet Exam
So, basically, they've shrunken his other head, instead?*
*Poetry not intended.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 68: Pillow Talk
If the exam is to see if he's having any kind of post-kidnapping trauma, wouldn't a psychiatrist be better? Or, at least, more appropriate?*
*A head-shrinker for a shrunken man. ;-)
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 70: Blast from the Past
So happy you continued this. For a second there, I thought you had finished. Didn’t want to say anything, but as an ending felt rushed with too many loose ends. Looking back now, I like those chapters even more, since it’s clear you were building to something that’s finally starting to show. Great work, can’t wait for the next round of chapters!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I know writing quantity has slowed down for this story, it's not a reflection of me losing interest. I'm intent on finishing it. Because the story is nearing the end and I wanted to slow down to consider plot threads and different possible ways of concluding it. I'm also mentally tossing around the idea of a third story or spin-off, so I don't want to rush and conclude the story in a way which accidentally wraps up things which might be explored later.
[Report This]Date: August 09 2022 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 70: Blast from the Past
Loved this chapter so much. It's like Scott was a piece of Jerry's mind just yelling at him. He's definitely about to be thinking about what he said for a while.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment! I guess it was exploring how Scott and Jerry used to be similar but have changed since they last saw each other.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2022 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 67: Another Proposal
And they all loved happily ever after. :-)
Thanks for finally bringing this epic full circle where I always hoped it would.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading thus far! I'm glad you liked it. This is what I really wanted, too. I just had to figure out how to get there, and hope the reader went along with it.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2022 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 66: New Life
Looks like Mr. Mousseau will soon be saying "Goodbye To Hollywood" (with apologies to Billy Joel).
[Report This]Date: June 08 2022 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 65: After Party Part 4: Paradise
"Houston, the Eagle has returned to the nest."
[Report This]Date: June 08 2022 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 64: After Party Part 3: the Firebird Café
It's amazing how the legal concept of "informed consent" now seems more defined by size rather than age in this universe.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2022 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 63: After Party Part 2: Pool
Why does the phrase "24 Firebirds baked in a pie..." keep ringing through my warped brain?
[Report This]Date: June 08 2022 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 62: After Party Part 1: Balcony
He should've accepted Bikini Babe's offer, voluntarily. No fire could possibly be hotter than Anya's frying pan (if you'll pardon the mauled metaphor).
Date: June 08 2022 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 61: Foot Spa
It's a miracle that the back-up dancer let him "back up" for air, each time!
[Report This]Date: June 08 2022 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 60: Hide and Seek Part 3
Cue the "Mission; Impossible" theme. ;-)
[Report This]Date: June 08 2022 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 59: 5 Star Prison Cont'd
Man! He can't even be rescued by getting stolen by someone else!!
Talk about an unlucky streak.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2022 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 65: After Party Part 4: Paradise
What a cliffhanger! I wonder if Jen knows that Jerry was kidnapped and not just cheating on her. I'm hoping Jerry can actually explain everything to her before he suffers even more because he's just been getting raped for like 10 chapters. You've got me hooked on the plot and I couldn't stop reading until I got caught up. I'm just hoping Jen and Jerry make it to the end of the story still intact.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment! It's going to be addressed in an upcoming chapter, so I don't want to say much. But, Jen is a fairly perceptive person, and reads Jerry like a book, so either way, she wouldn't be deceived for too long.