I don't get it. Was he having a day-mare about the wedding ceremony?

Author's Response:

It was a series of feverish lucid nightmares brought on by the stress and exhaustion of the sexual activity.

What did she tattoo on him: "Property of Jennifer/"

Author's Response:

'J.S.T' her initials. Because he is so small, there wasn't much space.

I think he was right the first time. The lucky "accident" was prearranged. By Jerry's future self; Remy!

Glad you're continuing this. Being a bit smaller than a ant definitely seems like a nightmare. Out of curiosity: How tall is Jen? I may have missed it in the previous story but from the way she is described, I would think she is around 5'10. 

On the other hand, there are some love story tropes that are about as avoidable as black holes! Like talking with a mutual friend of the couple who are growing more-than-fond of each other. A conversation that generically boils down to this.

"Do you love her?"

"It's complicated."

"What's so complicated? You either love her...or you don't!"

That kind of observation has always struck me as asininely naive. True love, like morality, is not black-and-white. More like alternating shades of dark and light gray. It's only when both halves of the couple decide to fully commit to the relationship that the light gray becomes multicolored like a rainbow.

And I--for better or worse--am one of the incurably commitment-phobic.

Glad to see you back.  I'm also glad to see some chapters at Jerry at his new size.  I know its probably not going to be permanent but the descriptions of his interactions put a whole new perspective on everything and you have described it awesomely.  I especially love the Jerry stuck to the fingertip part.

Well, at least Katie didn't accidentally man-handle him.*

*Yet!

I just finished reading this first chapter. Wow! You really do have a knack for setting up your gts-stories in highly interesting ways. But, you know what they say about sequels? That, generally, they don't prove as successful as the parent story.

Still, you're first story about Jerry and Jennifer was wildly successful with me. In fact, if it were up to me, it would be decorated with one of Asukafan's blue ribbon icons! So, I expect this one won't be any different. :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Carycomic! I tend to agree about sequels, and  tried to get around this by pretending  I was still writing the first story past the end. Really appreciate the praise, thank you.

this story is amazing. You have illuminated the difference in size and power between Jerry and the gigantic party-goers with such startling and erotic clarity, especially between Jerry and Jennifer. He is a miniscule nothing for her lust. Wow, well done. In my opinion, this is minuss-like territory you've thus far explored with aplomb.

Please continue. And when I see a story so well-written with the BUTT tag, good lord, my heart's a thumping.