Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2022 10:51 PM Title: Shitty Day

this story is amazing. glad i got around to reading it

Reviewer: ZmanAttackz Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2021 7:01 AM Title: The Confrontation

I'm loving this story so much man. I hope we get some more of Casey's bare feet soon. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Next chapter will fulfil your request. :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2021 9:09 AM Title: The Confrontation

And there's the element I was missing: the baseball bat. It's another way of making a lot of noise and shaking things from inside the house.

Author's Response:

Exactly, and the shaking house from Susan's dead weight hitting the ground.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2021 8:53 PM Title: Mundane Memories

Let's parse this.

Painstaking minute after minute passed until he heard the familiar muffled thunk of the front door, devoid of any noise, an eerie silence had overwhelmed the house. The background hum of the innerworkings of their home was put to rest by the silence.

Presumably, Casey quietly walks to the front door. Someone then opens the door, and closes it. The lack of confrontation suggests that Casey and Susan were not together when the door opened and closed. If Susan opened it when Casey was there, Drew would've heard something. More likely, Casey went outside before Susan walked away from her car. This puts the confrontation outside.

That was until an ear-splitting screech rang out.

One of them was utterly terrified and in mortal danger. I assume that there's only one shrinker here, and Casey has it. It's also worth noting that whoever screamed was big enough for Drew to hear them. That implies that nobody was actually shrunk when a killing strike was made. But how do you terrify someone with mortal danger, when they haven't been reduced in size?

Closely followed by a thunderous quake

Would a stomp from Casey or Susan, at their usual size, be described this way? I don't think so. One of them would have to be much larger than normal to shake the house. But how large would one have to be to stomp on the other? For a foot to be large enough to cover and crush a person who's 24 feet tall, the foot's owner would have be, by my estimate, 160 feet tall.

I eagerly await the explanation in the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hmmm interesting. 

Just for sake of not spoiling anything I'll let you sit on it 'til next chapter.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2021 9:38 AM Title: Mundane Memories

As time goes on, it looks like Taylor is enjoying Austin’s ability to tolerate her stench and hygiene. It’s like she found the perfect roomate. Although, with Drew, she could always tease and mess with him since he didn’t like her physically pushing  him around. Lol. 

That flashback memory with Taylor rolling onto Drew was awesome. It was playful, a bit suggestive and is exactly what Taylor would do. 

Then we get Casey and wow, we quickly get a cliffhanger. The scream could mean anything, but that “thunderous quake”…. now that’s interesting.

This makes me wonder if someone actually grew. Did get hit by the shrink ray, but it actually grew her? And then maybe she stepped onto her mom’s car? Perhaps the step was what caused that quake feeling. 

Then again, Drew is tiny, so anything could be considered a quake. Man, I really don’t know what happened, but this is one heck of a cliffhanger.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I think Taylor is noticing some of the positives of both her roommates over time. 

Hahah, yeah it's exactly something she would do, with the intention of making Drew uncomfortable.

Left hugely up to interpretation but it could be anything, guess we'll find out soon enough what happened.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2021 9:10 AM Title: Little Errand

Wow, now this was a fun chapter! 

Great way to make your return with a Susan chapter. And I love how she planned all this. If she’s going to be a villain, I like how smart you made her to be. 

Everything she did to Dwight was fun to watch. She completely dominated him, even before she shrank him. 

Also, if she has this shrinking ability, then it’s likely that she shrank Michael. So far Susan shrank people she need to shrink for money. I wonder if she will shrink people for fun, soon. Lol

i can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad the Susan chapter finally paid off haha.

And yep, she was pretty meticulous in her planning. 

Dwight had no chance from the get go.

Thanks for reading as always!

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2021 6:38 PM Title: Little Errand

Wow what a return! I think I can speak for almost everyone when saying this is probably your best chapter yet. Not only do we finally get to meet Susan but we get some nice backstory, nice size comparisons between her and the kids she used to bully from the bracket difference, and ofc her ultimate endgame. Absolutely perfect! Ahhh you have no idea how good it feels to have a great giantess story back in this site again. It’s been a while. How tall is Susan btw? Is she like Casey at 24ft? 

My prediction: I think after Susan is eventually beaten, Casey is gonna take control of the company and because drew helped her, she’ll realize that not only was she wrong about him and tinies in general, she’ll prob offer him a job to work in the company to help make it up to him to reinstate back into the higher brackets maybe the same height as his roommate so they can both begin dating ;). But we shall see. Also that shrinking gun should be illegal no? Only the people in charge of the bracket Records should have jurisdiction of growing and shrinking. So that’s another ground of trouble against her. 

also I see you took the Twitter advice lolol. I think you gotta follow back to allow DMs between the two people so I sent ya a follow request! :) 

Author's Response:

Wow, thank you, very kind words! 

Glad you enjoyed all the little components of the chapter, though I wonder if you caught onto a subtle name drop during one of Susan's flashbacks. 

Susan is a foot taller than Casey, so 25ft.

Interesting prediction, that's assuming Casey is actually a good person deep down, so I guess we'll see. 

The shrinker is definitely illegal, what Susan has is merely an early prototype of an attempt to commercialise the product, it is by no means meant to be in the hands of a regular citizen. Susan has a whole list of felonies adding up against her name doesn't she. 

Haha yeah I did, I figured I probably should have a place where people can contact me, especially if I ever start doing commissions. But yep, I opened DM's to anyone and followed back.

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2021 12:15 PM Title: Little Errand

Golly, Susan's really completely insane. Like, Joker-level crazyness. She basically married someone just to remain tall. Like, what the fuck?

I hope Casey will get revenge for her dad and will also grew up figuratively - and literally - in future chapters !

Author's Response:

Susan definitely has a few screws loose... let's chalk it up to a bad upbringing. Does explain why Casey is a bit out there too haha.

Not sure how much room Casey has left to grow but I'd bet she is gonna put her all into getting revenge.

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 8:19 AM Title: New Plan

Wow I binged all 15 chapters and I gotta say I really love this story!!  I’m not really a fan of stories that involve both growth and shrink for scale difference issues, but this story is too good to pass up haha. I have some questions tho:

1) you mentioned Casey used to be 13ft and is now 24ft, but is that with respect to a normal human being or with respect to Drew who’s 2ft. 

2) was wondering if you still had discord? I’d love to talk to ya more about the story rather than making a huge ass paragraph here! 

Can’t wait till next chapter! :) 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! 

Yeah, when you using both growth and shrink it can get a bit confusing with scale but I try to always remind myself how the sizes would look and interact with each other so it doesn't feel too confusing. 

As for your questions. 

1) All the heights are in respect to regular sized people, it would be way too confusing if it was all based on whoever's perspective was talking. 

2) Because of phone verification I can't have 2 discord accounts haha, but I've just linked an email to this account so if you want to email me there about the story I'll get back to you!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2021 11:07 AM Title: Shitty Day

Don’t get me wrong, I love the story so far. But the latest chapters tend to seem a bit rushed. You packed so much into such a short time, it works, but it does feel a tad forced. The plot points are interesting, but I just don’t see drew or Casey making all those decisions so quickly. In any case, as a fetish story this is fantastic, and I hope you continue the focus on that as you nail their pet/owner dynamic without being overly cruel.

Author's Response:

I was a bit worried too much happened too quickly in these chapters, like I agree with what you're saying I think I made it work to an extent but it also seems a bit too fast. Having to explain plot reasonings is kind of a mark of an unclear story, but I may as well since I'm no professional. I wanted these events to happen fast and hard to heighten the shock and emotion felt from Casey, one minute she was loving life at some party and next thing we know her beloved dad is dead, this is what makes her act in an irrational way that is different from the Casey we know, she makes decisions quickly because right now her mental state is in tatters and she's more vulnerable than ever. Drew on the other hand, well yeah look, it's a bit far fetched for him to do what he did, and I was worrying about that as I wrote it but, idk I think if I tried to slow it down things may have ground to a halt slightly and I'm not the biggest fan of tiny man avoiding unaware giantess, I just find it too slow and overdone. Plus, Drew does have a plan, if Casey can help him he would actually have a way out of the house, because otherwise he would kind of just be stranded there, he's in the middle of a very wealthy neighbourhood, it's not exactly safe for him to escape onto the streets.

Ultimately, if this wasn't a fetish story, things would have probably panned out differently, which as I write this I realise means I have missed the mark slightly in a few plot areas, but that's what I get for deciding the direction of the story halfway through haha. Either way I'm glad you're enjoying, and I hope to continue to deliver with some hopefully better pacing and more true to their character moments.