Reviewer: rebmevon5072 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2023 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story! I keep coming back to revisit it every so often! Did you say there was a 3rd chapter made or coming at some point?

Author's Response:

Thank you, it's always a pleasure to know folk are enjoying my writing <3 

And yes, there's more planned with these characters. I have a rather long commission queue (around a year's wait) so I haven't been able to write it yet, but it should be fairly soon (hopefully next month). 

Reviewer: Underfoottiny Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2021 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Incredible writing, couldn't stop reading it. Hopefully you continue with another chapter. 

Author's Response:

Thank you, that's very kind. Maria and Madeleine will return someday, although I don't know yet if it'll be a new chapter or as part of a new story. 

Reviewer: Krell Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2021 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

A very enjoyable read. 

Author's Response:

Thank you <3

Reviewer: bustyshrink Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2021 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wooooooow this is one of the best stories I've read in a looooong time. Absolutely incredible. The characters were believable and the scenes were so carefully thought out to work with the characters' motivations and the whole thing was as erotic as it was terrifying. FANTASTIC work!

Author's Response:

Thank you, that's very kind <3 I love making characters feel believeable even if the situation isn't, it really sells the eroticism when you can understand why they're aroused <3 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2021 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is easily the best story I've read this year. It's not often you get to read a milf story from the perspective of her. This was just amazing! 

Basically the first 90% of the story is my fantasy. The ending is the only thing that I would've changed, but that's just for my own fantasy. I would've had Maria decide to keep him forever as her sex toy as the ending in my head so that way she could play with him as long as she wants. 

But enough of what I didn't like. Let's discuss the rest. And my goodness, I loved how it was all set up! The characters, the ex-husband, the horny single mom, the obliviousness of Jake. It was perfect!

Ive always wanted to read more horny milf stories like this and I can't seem to find much besides the usual mother/son dynamic. But with the son's friend, this was a recipe for success. If there was any inspiration to writing this story, please let me know about it, because it seems to be similar to what I enjoy as well.

Maria was easily the best character in this story. I love her confidence, and her balance of trying to be motherly, but also naughty at the same time. She wants to protect Erik as her son's friend, but also to use him since he reminds her of his ex. She could have molded Erik into her dream husband material by turning him into her sex toy and making him do what she wanted for the rest of her life. And since Erik is young, he will last for a long time. 

The phone call with Erik's mom scene was great. Maria teasing Erik with the towel and later pressing onto the door. Now that's creative! Then the masturbation scene with Erik was great. I do wonder how come she didn't check Jake's room to see who's bed was empty. She didn't have to play that risky. Lol.

The way Maria dragged Erik to her "lair" was perfect. I love how you wrote Maria having all this control, while Erik was at her mercy. Especially in the dark since Maria knows the whereabouts in the room while Erik is unsure. 

The next sex scene was fantastic too! There's so much good stuff before any of the shrinking happens. And that Facesitting scene was amazing. I love how Erik had no idea what he was doing and was shocked when Maria just had her pussy on his face. 

For the vial, I think we needed a few more thoughts from her to consider other options before she decided to give him the dose. I thought she had some time since Erik was still exhausted on the bed. 

The milk idea was smart. If it was water, who knows what color the vial would change into. With milk, the milk is likely thick enough to not change much so it was a good idea for her to mix the vial in with it. 

All the hugging and cuddling scenes were just spectacular. Smothering him with her boobs and telling him he is safe while he struggles to breathe was kinda hot. 

When Erik shrank, I love how Maria immediately got horny seeing him as dildo size, and deciding to use him. And Erik's reluctance makes this so much better! He just wants to go home, but Maria is too horny to care about that. And when she was done, she left him in her sex toy drawer! I could only imagine what he was thinking when he got put in there. He may not have seen anything with the drawer closed, but I'm sure he could smell Maria's scent with all those toys he is it. 

The shower scene was great! I love how Maria still had a slight bit of guilt, but ultimately chose her desires to use Erik to scrub her body. 

But the going out scene is what solidified this story as one of my favorites. She couldn't have him be free, so she traps him in the crotch of her panties. Not only that, but she was also wearing tight jeans to force him tightly agaisnt her. This is a theme that I thought only I used to write about on other websites, so to see another story with this is just perfect! 

Maria then spends 1 on 1 time with Erik out in public. Nothing too crazy happened while she was in public, but I was hoping this was her way to thinking how she will keep Erik hidden while she continued with her life in the future. It was the perfect setup to it as well. 

Part of me wondered if there would be a scene with Maria doing exercises. I could imagine her changing into some tight yoga pants while Erik is still stuck to her crotch. Then Maria does many exercises that forces Erik into some erotic positions. Speaking of positions, I love the parts where Maria would cross her legs, squeezing Erik even more. That's just sexy! 

Anyway, I am just happy to read a story like this and I would love to see more like this in the future! Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review! It's always a delight hearing what folk enjoyed in a story.

Explaining the mindset and how Maria came to become this dominant predator was so fun to write. All too often the preds in these stories are just eating machines which makes them far less interesting characters.

For the vial usage, yeah that was pretty swift and in hindsight I might have added some more internal monologue about using it or not. I put the swiftness down to her post-climax panic at the situation and realising she could be in deep trouble if Erik told anyone, so she didn't think it through much.

In regards to keeping Erik around, Maria still has some of that vial left, she can always make new toys~ 

As for the yoga scene you'd like to see, there's something similar planned for part 2 <3  

And yeah MILF stories are almost always incestous (and spoiler warning: part 2 of this will go in that direction at the request of the commissioner). You might enjoy the other two stories I wrote that involve Madeleine, as while she isn't a parent, her role as a therapist puts her in a similar dominant position. She appears in both The Shrink (https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10180) and Intimate Therapy (https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10573).