Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2021 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Overall, I liked this opening chapter. I enjoyed reading the intro about your own fantasies as well. 

Also, since this is a giantess website, I don't think you needed to explain the notion about how guys are usually dominant and so on and think that giantess women are a strange kink. Most of us probably have the same perspective as you. Lol. 

I am curious about how he met her though. He first saw her and somehow found her Facebook. Did he know her name or how did that happen? 

I like the witchcraft twist. There isn't that many ways to have someone shrunken. It's usually something scientific or magic/witchcraft. Lol

So the woman shrank her boss for simply looking at her? I guess she got treated poorly, but I thought it was a little strange how she wanted to see her manager's face and use that to decide if she wanted to shrink her or not. 

As for shrinking the random guy. You mentioned he was harassing her, but what exactly was he doing? Recently, harassment doesn't have a clear definition, so it's easy to misinterpret. Basically, part of me believes that the guy could've done nothing wrong and the woman just thought it was harassment. Idk, but I think a description of the harassment would help me confirm that he was a bad guy. 

The bedroom scene at the end was great. Loved how she got confident and decided to want him sexually. Also, it was hot to see her swallow the shrunken man in front of him. 

I think you could space out the paragraphs a bit more so there arent as many blocks of text as it is now. 

Lastly, I love how long this chapter was. Lots of content to read and it makes a strong start to this story. 

I can't wait for the next chapter!