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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2021 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice start.  A lot of ways the "hero's" banishment can go.

It would have been nice if she had to work on him for a while before he caved in and began licking her toe in defeat {or is it "de-feet"???  he he he}.

Am interested in how this is going to play out for the hero over the course of centuries.

Will we find out how her feet smell and taste?

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