Date: July 15 2011 1:52 PM Title: Big girls don't cry
Wow, a fine ending. However, you spelt bite 'byte' a number of times in your story.
Author's Response: Thanks, you are right I really should revise my spelling.
Date: July 15 2011 1:40 PM Title: There and back again
Wow, hamster cage, that's harsh...
Date: July 15 2011 1:37 PM Title: A hard day's work
Oh no, she's turning evil! I hope he doesn't die...
Date: July 15 2011 1:34 PM Title: No hard feelings
An interesting twist but I was not really expecting it. Why would he disobey her if she had a bad day?
Date: July 15 2011 1:27 PM Title: Giantess Jen and I
Wow, this is pretty interesting, onto the next chapter!
Date: February 06 2009 11:24 PM Title: Giantess Jen and I
You did well with this one, Mr. Slave. I admit, there are some grammer and spelling errors, but nothing that detracts from the overall feel, and the fact that you had a coherent storyline throughout the read made it quite compellng. As a fan of them, I would of course have liked some unaware mixed with some vore, but even lacking that, I approve of what you did, and hope to see more of this quality from you.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2009 6:03 PM Title: Big girls don't cry
Three cheers for poetic justice! :-D
Date: February 06 2009 5:54 PM Title: Window of opportunity
Hmmm! At Writing.com, this cliffhanger would have had two options: "try to escape" and "stay where you are."
Let's see if he succeeds at the former.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2009 11:10 PM Title: Giantess Jen and I
Yes, this story is very worthy. I really liked it. I hope we're getting more, but that it isn't something that will never conclude (such as my own work...ahum).
Author's Response: Thanks to everyone for the reviews, I already gve it an end but I find its the hardest part of the writting! Hope to come up with better stuff in the future.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2009 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Heh! "Respect," she says. That's the trouble with this world. Too many people (parents, in particular) mistakenly think "respect" and "courtesy" are one and the same thing. Extremely the opposite!
True respect has to earned by everyone _before_ being given to anyone! Parents included. Only common courtesy is owed automatically. Although, still not unconditionally.
In short; Jon is right to be paranoid about his captor. Because, as I've said about similar giantesses in other stories, this girl clearly has more issues than a subway news stand!
[Report This]Date: January 15 2009 8:44 AM Title: Giantess Jen and I
Wow, i catch this story a bit late, but it's all the better. brilliant descriptions as well as enjoyable situations and characters! A really nice read, keep up the good work!!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2009 9:15 AM Title: There and back again
This giantess is proving a bit bipolar.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2008 8:15 PM Title: No hard feelings
Too little/too late, Jon. LOL!
Date: December 27 2008 1:53 PM Title: Giantess Jen and I
Nice descriptive writing and a very real take on the emotional POV under the circumstances. Thank you.
Date: December 26 2008 6:47 PM Title: Giantess Jen and I
enjoyable read