[Report This]Date: November 19 2022 2:38 AM Title: Friday Morning
I came back to this story after reading the first issue of the comic on Giantess fan comics and I have to say I am really glad that you decided to adapt this story into a comic!
One noticeable difference is that instead of Richard's family, in the comics it is Richard's friends
Date: April 25 2022 2:55 PM Title: Sunday Evening
Will we see the failed attempts of other families??
[Report This]Date: September 18 2021 2:27 PM Title: Sunday Morning
Oh wow, now things are going to get intense at their new sizes. Any chance of them to find themselves back on the mom's thong before the end ;)
[Report This]Date: September 09 2021 7:40 PM Title: Friday Morning
The sense of scale in this story is incredible, I love how the wife comes off like a force of nature.
[Report This]Date: August 23 2021 3:07 AM Title: Saturday Morning
Looking forward to the next chapter of the story. I wonder if the mention of the mom's thong is foreshadowing for where they might end up trapped soon. ;)
Date: August 20 2021 12:31 PM Title: Friday Morning
Do you plan on continuing this? It was a really great story and I'd love to see two more days of this drawn out! I've been checking daily, dont lose steam!
Author's Response:
Oh yes, I absolutely do. I'm just in a sort of transitional phase in my real life currently with a new job. I was between jobs when I started writing this, which is why it's been awhile since I've updated it. But I do want to continue it!
Date: August 10 2021 4:42 PM Title: Friday Evening
Excellent, love the unaware theme
[Report This]Date: August 10 2021 7:27 AM Title: Friday Morning
I'm loving the whole force of nature/landscape perspective of the wife, it's really well done.
Side note, is there any chance you'll ever continue your Distant Frontier story? I remember reading it when you put it up and loved it. Would have loved to read more about Arrel and Bradley.
Date: August 10 2021 2:27 AM Title: Friday Morning
Gotcha! That explination adds alot to it and is pretty unique here! I can't emphasize enough how good this story is shapping up to be also.
Date: August 09 2021 6:11 PM Title: Friday Morning
This is amazing and has the potential to be one of the best stories on here. To help with the narritive flow and setting pictures in the readers mind, have you considered writing little paragraphs from the wifes POV. Like break up the acton and write whats going through her head? It would help with the imagry. Just a sudgestion! Excellent writting!
Author's Response:
I actually plan on not sharing her POV. Evelyn, the wife, functions as a immense landscape or a destructive hurricane. We only see her from the perspective of her shrunken family, so she's basically a towering force of nature that they must survive. I want the readers to see her exclusively how the family sees and experiences her. That way we can only speculate what's on her mind and what she'll do next, as any minor action is a huge deal at their current size.
But thanks for reading and your kind words! :)
[Report This]Date: August 09 2021 5:59 PM Title: Friday Afternoon
Enjoing this so far, but how come the giant wife doesn't have a name? And who's the person that shrunk them and why?
Author's Response:
She does, it's Evelyn. It's been mentioned a couple of times in the story, but I try to avoid using it because I want people to view her like a dangerous landscape or a powerful force of nature rather than a person, which is also why the story has ventured into her perspective of things.
We'll learn more about the Voice in due time. ;)
[Report This]Date: August 08 2021 1:34 AM Title: Friday Morning
Great so far, but who the hell shrunk these people and WHY?
[Report This]Date: August 07 2021 5:12 PM Title: Friday Morning
Love the theme. Please continue .