Date: March 06 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue
I absolutely loved this. I hope to see more of Alice and her shrinking fantasies soon
[Report This]Date: January 27 2016 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alice & Bath Time
Grammar could do with a little check here and there, but what you have is great. The subtle reference to Alice in Wonderland is always pleasing, too.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice review. Yes, you're dead right. It was the first thing I ever wrote when I was 19. It needs some heavy subbing. Glad you enjoyed it though!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice review. Yes, you're dead right. It was the first thing I ever wrote when I was 19. It needs some heavy subbing. Glad you enjoyed it though!
[Report This]Date: March 01 2015 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue
A most delightfully quirky conclusion for an x-rated work, albeit there's been spelling and grammar mistakes all through the story, which has led to quite a bit of pausing to deduce what was meant to be said.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews mate. I'm sorry about all the spelling, this was the first thing I wrote, about 7 years ago, maybe more. I think my story Small Doses is much better. But I do have issues in most of my life with spell checking etc. Trust me.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 9: Alice’s Climax
For all the eroticism and... oh, I wanted to say something constructive here but the site logged me out when I tried to post the review... anyway, sometimes the fact that they're all at different scales can be a bit heavy on our efforts to picture it.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 8: Alice & The Morning After
You've got a good framework for some truly extraordinary ideas here. I mean, a spectacular day in London of all places. (read: British weather)
[Report This]Date: February 28 2015 2:40 PM Title: Alice & The Sleepover: Chapter 7: Mena & The Costume
I'm not usually a fan of bondage and the like but you've made good use of the setting for it to be of little consequence to those of us who are much more focused on the size-shifting elements.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2015 2:15 PM Title: Alice & The Sleepover: Chapter 6: Charlotte & The Big Screen
Rather a clever use of a risqué setting.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2015 1:44 PM Title: Alice & The Sleepover: Chapter 4: Chelsea & The Mountains
And so the real body of the story begins.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alice & Bath Time
Looks like this story's really starting to get somewhere. There's a fair amount of promise in this chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2015 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Alice & The Locket
For an opening it could work very well, if it's possible to go back and correct the spelling mistakes.
Date: December 27 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: Alice & The Locket
Well, this is like merry-go-round of shrinking. Everyone has to try a taste of it. And it is very - how has it been called by someone who came before me? - "playfull", indeed. And of course very sexy too!
Comrade, keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: December 26 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue
is there going to be an sequal to this story i really cant wait for 1 if there is going to be one
[Report This]Date: September 13 2012 8:39 AM Title: Alice & The Sleepover: Chapter 4: Chelsea & The Mountains
The story so far seems to prove what most literotica is about: an unnatural shrinking/growing with a gentle/kind giantess, but with an ulterior motive. this story can only get better and i wish there was an 11 on the ratings!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2012 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: Alice & The Locket
Definitly one of the best stories I've read on here. Also, I think the characters are more true to how people would be in real life than just about every other story on here. Like the plot, like most of the situations, and I like that you tried to get just about every theme in there without having to start killing off characters. I also like the fact that, even while there was some aspect of torture and some of the characters (mainly the sister) seemed to give in way too easily (and I think Alice was way to quick to begin abusing the other characters) Alice didn't turn into some sort of power obsessed dominatrix and everyone was more or less back to normal at the end.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the decent and honest review. The thing I find is that there a LOT of cliches in this genre, most of which spoil and sexual shrinking fantasy for me. I try and either work with them or move around them if I can. I wrote it a long time ago and if I did it again then I think the sister would resist more, however Alice might have satyed the same ;)
[Report This]Date: September 12 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Alice & The Locket
What to say that haven't already been said? Playful and artistic. It really paints the picture for you by reading. Great stuff
[Report This]Date: December 21 2009 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Alice & The Locket
Just finished reading this about a week back, only now had the time to leave a comment about it. In my opinion, one of the best, and sexiest, works on this site. The images evoked by your narrative left me able to perfectly picture everything as it was happening. An absolutely superb piece of work.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2009 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue
Read thsi just now for the second time.
As I'm now registered I thougth too say a great story you have written here.
And one of the aspects I liked the most that Alice didn't turn evil (more then a tiny but).
Great work.
Author's Response: I've never quite got the *poof* she's evil thing. It perforates a lot of stories on here and I don't think its realistic. Many people wouldn't react all ultra-violent if these situations occurred in real life....Well I don't think so anyway.Thanks for your positive comments, feedback is pretty minimal on this forum.Keep it Premium
[Report This]Date: February 23 2009 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Alice & The Locket
What a great start, look forward to any more you add.