Date: August 08 2021 2:14 AM Title: Meeting Up
That was really terrific. I really appreciate your proper use of grammar, which made reading your story both easy and a delight.
Other options? Hmmm, perhaps Alice could put David in a contact lens, then walk about town with his tiny form in her sight, yet invisible to all others.
Maybe Alice could sniff David up her nose. She could smell his testosterone scented manliness while he is swimming about her snot, or hugging and licking her boogers.
How about David having a safari through Alice's pubic hairs?
Looking forward to the next chapters.
Date: August 07 2021 9:54 AM Title: Meeting Up
Interesting so far! I'm curious what exploring Alice's body would be like, especially her butt from within her panties.
Date: August 07 2021 5:02 AM Title: Meeting Up
Thanks for writing an extreme-size difference relationship story~. There aren't very many of these in English, so I appreciate your attempt at creating a world with tech where it may work out in interesting ways.
Going by the warning about future chapters becoming gross, I wouldn't know what to suggest that fits within your own personal interests. Regardless, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm not sure how a story being gross would limit the possibilities, if anything, it allows for more interesting stuff. Gross stories can still be cute or romantic, or contain elements that aren't 100% gross, like for example the spit in this chapter.