Date: August 06 2021 4:46 AM Title: Part 2
This is probably one of the best giantess stories I've read. I love the interaction and desire from our female leads. Also the description and vividness are amazing!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2021 11:28 AM Title: Part 2
Phenomenal part 2. Absolutely nailed it. Gonna have to disagree with you though on whether this should stay closed ended. This has such a good opening and realistic characters. You don't need to start from scratch with something similar. Perhaps take a break for awhile then return to this when you feel the drive to write. But I would argue this as the perfect opening since you can pretty much go any direction from here with so many different avenues to explore.
Author's Response:
I wrote this story to be two parts, not because it doesn't have the potential to be continued, but simply because I don't have the time to make it longer. Since the time I conceived and wrote this about five months ago, my life and the amount of free time I have has changed a lot. I'm relatively happy with the open-endedness of it currently; while I would never rule out revisiting these characters, I'm somewhat pleased that this story stands alone as a vignette of a rather extraordinary day.
I really appreciate your comments though, and it's reading praise like yours that makes me want to carve time out of my days to continue writing in the future!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2021 1:27 AM Title: Part 2
Wait, this story is over? The story tags say it's listed as completed. And the ending of this chapter kinda feels like an ending, but I hope that's not the case.
Well, either way, this is one amazing sexy chapter! I love how aroused she was! The scene with the mirror was nice, and even the comment about keeping him trapped in her crotch while being out in public sounds hot.
Oh yeah, the finger dripping scene was sexy too. It was great to hear her thoughts too since we didn't see everything. I wanted to also see Kesley's playtime as well since she said that her friend gets horny in a similar fashion.
Brad is actually living my dream. She makes a good point about how it's his choice if he enjoys it or not. I know I love it, just like her so maybe I could replace him one day. Haha!
Well, if this story is finished, I would love to see you write more stories like this and I can't wait for it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words! I hope you had as much fun reading this as I did writing it.
Brad (and the unnamed narrator) are both pretty much living the dream that most of us in this community have. But I've always felt like most other people would entirely not enjoy being thrust (no pun intended) into a situation like this. Like, of all the people in the world to randomly shrink one day, what are the odds that they would be a macrophile? Probably pretty low. I wanted to specifically write to this idea.
And yeah, as you may have seen in my other comments, I always planned for this story to only be two parts. The rest of 2021 is very hectic for me, but who knows, maybe I'll write more and share it here in the future!
[Report This]Date: August 03 2021 9:14 PM Title: Part 2
Great one, Q-writer!
Looking forward to the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: July 31 2021 9:29 AM Title: Part 1
Whoa! This story is amazing, and the sexual stuff hasn't even happened yet!
The part that got me into this story were these 2 women. They feel....real. Many stories have stereotypical giantesses and that's fine for me. However, the writing in this chapter is insanely good. To see them figure out what's going on and consider each possibility was fun to watch.
It's also so rewarding to see them gradually choose to keep as a pet rather than immediately once they saw him. That way, she won't have these doubts later on and these women will be confident in toying with Brad.
Also, the man trying to escape in the beginning was good, too. It shows how desperate he is to leave and I love how it pressured the ladies into trapping him.
Also, nice work with the story description. That alone was enough to make me click on this story. It's a great, fun idea to write about and I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 31 2021 1:59 AM Title: Part 1
This is way more up my alley. Nothing against mirror, can't even begin to imagine the amt of work that took. But for me it's all about the simpler stories. This knocks it out of the park in that regard. Cheers and fingers crossed you decide to expand beyond two parts.
Author's Response:
No offense taken about Mirror, in a lot of ways this kind of shorter story is more my cup of tea too. I certainly won't ever write another Mirror-length story, it was fun but the amount of time it took was exhausting. While I don't see myself expanding this story past two parts, maybe if I get the time in the next year or so I might write a medium-length story with a similar plot to this one.
Date: July 30 2021 3:22 PM Title: Part 1
Really well done so far! I could definitely see these girls acting realistically.