[Report This]Date: August 05 2021 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 8 Phil gives in
I'm starting to feel sorry for Phil. I don't know how he'll be able to figure out a way to stop his shrinking since the prime suspect seems to act like nothing is wrong. And with the other issue that nobody but himself knows that he's getting smaller, there's no one (except for maybe John or Jack) that can help him with this problem. Looking forward to seeing how this will progress. Since your other titles that you have written have been on the gentle giantess, I'm hoping for a good ending to this story.
[Report This]Date: July 30 2021 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 5 Phil realizes his small problem
Wasn't expecting a reality alteration for this story. Thought it was going to be some slow shrinking with everyone noticing the changes. Interested in seeing how this goes, now that Jack is presumably alive.
Author's Response:
First and foremost, thank you for taking the time to read the story. I had originally set out to write a one-off story that would entail a slow shrink scenario. But as I was writing the second chapter, I decided to change course and try to make a series of stories based on the premise of a PI taking a "simple" case which turns out to be anything but. I want to see how this one turns out first. If my ending sucks, or just doesn't make sense, then I will go back to my original intention.