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Reviewer: TakexMexAway Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

._.  Thanks for making me jizz...

Reviewer: zendoren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2008 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bravo! I have been waiting for an author that understands subtleness; your story develops very well and creates suspense. Character development is one of the best tools to keep a reader reading and as I see it you have a lot of questions to answer! I love the story… this one is my new Fav! Can’t with to see what adventures await our friends!



Author's Response: Thanks very much for the great rating and generous review, and on Christmas day one the less! This series will have another five or so stories to it, each one involving Chris but the the female characters are likely to change with each addition. How will the series end? Stay tuned...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2008 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

As Chris, himself, might say:

"WOW! WHAT AN OPENING!"

Reviewer: rhino2003 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2008 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good start, keep it coming.

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2008 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it, hope there's more of these coming.

Author's Response: There is, actually. I've got a whole series laid out, and part two was halfway done when my computer crashed. It'll take a little time to rewrite, but it should be here soon enough.

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