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Reviewer: Twjr0228 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2021 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Dates and Dreams

Great premise and first chapter! And I appreciate the fact that you established the baseline heights of your characters!

Reviewer: b123 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2021 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Dates and Dreams

This is a great start so far! Would be interesting to see how James and Alena interact when James is a lot shorter. Look forward to your next chapter!

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