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Reviewer: cixelsyd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2021 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Would love to see a sequel set a few years later. Over time he moved on to other projects and disassembled the shrinking machine. Curious to know more, he snooped through old journals and realized just how reckless he had been. Reading him describe her soles as "his whole world" and how was his ultimate savior had slowly influenced her subconscious. As she matured into a young lady she would often startle herself awake, breathing heavily and greatly aroused, but the dream would always fade from memory before she could pinpoint what happened.

Now it's his last night before moving out to some far-off city, where he'll have even more resources for his research and development. For many weeks she has battled a growing anxiety that he cannot be trusted on his own with his wild inventions. Despite her best efforts, he refuses to reconsider moving away and also insists that she cannot accompany him. As she tosses and turns in bed, half-asleep and wracked with worry, it suddenly dawns on her that she must become his savior once more. She creeps into the attic to unpack a very special box, certain it's the only way to protect her beloved...

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2021 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely great. Would love to see more of this. The nano scale, the unaware, the uncertainty, the despair, all amazing.

Reviewer: sst21 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 08 2021 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Feels a tad short, but it's well-written and to the point. Although it seems it's a one-off, I am curious about the brother's excusions on Tina in detail similar to this story or future conflicts between the two

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2021 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a great read!

I felt going into this, having read the premise we'd get a sad/bad ending, but you surprised me.

I liked that in the end Tina learned the truth and was now monitoring her brother during his shrinking excursions, and that he didn't spend the rest of his life lost nano size.

Content wise, you wrote that all very well too, loved the foot content and the description was great. 

Loved it :D 

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

I jusr realize her name is "Lisa" in the summary but "Tina" in the story itself. Still love it thoughh

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2021 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Will there be more of this? I love it so much!!!

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