Reviewer: Petite Soeur Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2021 4:00 PM Title: Viral Growth Begins

"Let's Ragnarok!"

 

The summary warning made me put this story on the side burner for a couple weeks before I decided to start reading from the first chapter. I found the contents so far to actually be enjoyable, though I still don't know if your aim is to make shameless erotica of taboo topics and the enjoyment the characters feel while partaking in the taboo, or if your aim will be akin to the many other western size-fetish authors whose fiction is meant to elicit a disgust response by being as horribly gross as humanely possible. I'll stick around if it continues to be the former, and skim past the latter.

 

I particularly enjoyed the 2nd chapter with the fairies--fantasy races and lactation+shrink being some of my kinks, and started reading the 3rd chapter wondering what was going to happen to Kal. With what happened to daddy, I guess Kal's harem is going to consist of a fair number of orphans and widows when the effects of his magic unintentionally ruins the surrounding human society. 

 

With the way you wrote the warning, I kind of thought Kal was going to turn into a bastard with his newfound powers. But so far, it seems it's more like he's a conscientious person with subconscious kinks influencing others that's going to cause him trouble reining in any sort of normalcy in his life in another world. Curious if he's going to remain a victim of his fantasy harem or if he's eventually going to figure out a way to dominate them and earn some respect.

 

I can't offer a critique of the writing other than I found it readable, and the pace was a breath of fresh air compared to other stories that go on forever. Considering your interest in exploring the well of degeneracy, there's a size-fetish author on Deviantart called Happiest in the Shadows. He keeps working on multiple serials, and I've never been able to finish any of them though he went pretty deep in the well to make his characters do and experience horrible stuff. Part of what makes him an absolute degenerate is how he drip feeds the reader promises of their fetishes being explored, and takes forever and ever to get around to it; that man is not normal ("sence, sence, sence"). In essence, you explored a taboo and made it entertaining. You're a good goy.

 

In any case, I'm looking forward to the future edited chapters and what other fantasy races aside from the fairies you plan to explore in this Norse(?)-themed world.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment!

I suppose I meant degeneracy in terms of rape and body horror and other things like not-overly detailed gore. I don't want Kal himself to be a bad guy. One of my internal themes is "the road to hell is paved with good intentions." I want to convey a sense that what happened to these characters was really fucked up and the reader will know that these were unintended consequences of Kal.

Reviewer: camoblackhawk Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2021 5:10 PM Title: Did I Just Get Isekai'd?

More please.

Reviewer: Carl2796 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2021 5:07 AM Title: Did I Just Get Isekai'd?

Really good first chapter