Date: May 31 2009 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Now, now, 'eatmeplease' a schoolboy does not criticise his teacher. A story, to be enjoyed must run smoothly with the necessary correctness, otherwise it can be like a chap trying to seduce a female dressed in a suit of armour. My views are constructive but you deem to see them as otherwise. You wouldn't bite a helping hand, would you?
Anyway, do continue writing. Any yarns involving vore are pretty exciting.
Date: May 04 2009 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, eatmeplease, this is a yarn from way back. I can't remember where it was, but I'd like to tell you that I enjoyed it again, and what I enjoyed doing was to correct all those grammatical errors...the punctuations, commas, semi-colons, full stops, capital letters and separating paragraphs. It was like correcting schoolboys' essays. Anyway, it IS a good yarn, so I'm giving you 7 out of 10 for trying.....
Banfield
Author's Response:
Hi Banfield pretty boring review it seems you use a standard criteria regarding your comments about an author's story therefore i will disregard your views.
I personally prefer to read the stories content and entertainment value rather than be critical about an authors abilities to compile a grammatically correct text,i thank you once again for your observations regarding the story please add any constructive comments on future uploads.iI look forward to reading any replies.
Author's Response:
Hi Banfield pretty boring review it seems you use a standard criteria regarding your comments about an author's story therefore i will disregard your views.
I personally prefer to read the stories content and entertainment value rather than be critical about an authors abilities to compile a grammatically correct text,i thank you once again for your observations regarding the story please add any constructive comments on future uploads.I look forward to reading any replies.