Haven't been on the site in a while, glad to see Trials is still getting updated. I really like Susan and I hope that we get to know more about her personality and thoughts. For some reason, knowing what someone is thinking and feeling in these kinds of stories is always the biggest turn on for me. I do hope our little protagonist survives to see the end of this story and gets a happy if severely traumatized ending and he doesn't end up getting lost in Susan forever... Keep 'em coming!

"But you're tiny! [...]What would she make you do?"

And:

"Trim the carpet?"

These two lines seem like some daunting foreshadowing for our protagonist 0.0

Author's Response: How completely inhumane! I'm sure her mother would never do anything of the sort! 😇

Nice. From stuffy bra to on top of a soda. I really hope Chris ends up falling through the hole the straw makes and in the drink itself. Especially if Chris gets swallowed by either Heather, or a friend of hers that you never met that meets up with Heather before she can get you out. Even more so if we get to see Chris' POV inside the stomach, though that might be because I really enjoy full tour vore(especially when unaware) were the tiny survives, and you can see their journey.

This story really is superb! The writing style is very fluent and there seems to be a natural flow between the characters. You have a nice way of describing the scenery, giving enough detail to make the characters, rooms, situations, appearances, traits, etc. with enough detail to make them alive, but leave room for imagination and a better flow of the story. 

I also enjoy the relative realism in the characters. Most stories just have one socio-psychopathic giantess with no remorse or character and a tiny with equally little character who is there either just to hate it and die or to somehow completely enjoy it (and die). Chris seems realistic as a person who has a shrinking fetish in that he would both somewhat enjoy it and be terrified simultaneously - which is probably how I would react lol. Alexis seems like a very interesting character as well, with the same realism attached. I can imagine someone who gets a kick from shrinking people not suddenly turning into an uncaring murderer, but still having their morality and ethics severely challenged by the sudden opportunity. Celia does come across as a meanie, but that honestly wouldn't even be a bad thing. I think that can still be great and offer some variation and a genuinely nervous reading experience, as I've gotten invested in Chris' character and him being with a possible psycho can really spice thing up!

One point of feedback I would like to leave with. I think you're writing works really well with extended scenery and character interaction, and I think longer chapters could help with that. The flow of the story is one of this story's main strengths and the longer the chapter is, the better I think the flow would be.

Keep it up! This is def one of my favorite stories on the site atm, and one of the main reasons I keep returning. Also, as someone who recently moved away from a hotspot city center, I can confirm that I am indeed a witch..

Interesting. I wonder if drunk Heather will forget about Chris, and he end up with an unaware Becky. Especially if he shrinks smaller again.

Love reading Lexi's internal monologue, especially the latter bits of Chap.1 and middle of Chap.2 where she discovers and then contemplates the sexual thrill she experiences when dominating his insignificant existence.

Keep up the great work & hope getting a bunch of well-deserved commission requests!

Great story. I like the build up they have as they enjoy each other. I hope that Alexis forgets that he is in the rag and starts rubbing him over herself. Or leaves him there and Heather finds the rag. I can't wait for the next chapter

Loving this, especially the focus on trapping him right up against her sweaty asshole for long periods. It'd be great to see her make him even smaller down there, or get caught up in an unexpected engagement leading to her forgetting he's there for a while, leaving him in there for the whole day.

I loved it. This is one of my favorite scenarios. I wrote something VERY similar called Wager Between Friends, if you're interested in checking it out. 

I hope you continue this because I feel like the dynamic has a lot of potential that I never explored further. Thanks for sharing :)

Instantly one of my favorites, definitely excited to hear you have more planned. Big fan of Lexi's attitude, wouldn't mind seeing her lean into her power more as it progresses, but it's your story and will be great either way.