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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2023 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good erotic story, with a bit of a surprise ending for Dante. However, while it's still pretty good, I don't feel it's quite on the same level as some of your other efforts. The pacing was just a teeny (or tiny, pun intended) bit off and there was just a bit too much profanity-laced dialogue.

Reviewer: Edmond Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2021 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was a a really good, cool story! I'd LOVE to be Carissa's toy too, if she ever gets bored of Dante someday. The almost-vore scene was superb, loved it! Also, I'm not an ass-man but liked the anal scene too. You write very well, you did an excellent job with this story and surely deserves the 5 stars!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words! This was my first time working with a (relatively) benevolent pred so I'm so pleased it worked for you. 

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