You did a great job getting across how unbelieavbly massive she is becoming. Body exploration at such sizes is always fun. I hope she interacts with the doctor one more time.

Just as good -- if not better -- as it's ever been.

I'm wondering if Ran will develop a control over her bodily functions. I can totally see her willing herself to, say, go into hibernation for as long as she desires if she so chooses. Something about a giantess deciding to go to sleep, becoming a fixture in the environment for an indeterminate amount of time, is quite attractive to me. But I somehow sense she has more "active" plans for the planet.

Hey, really hope the next part is coming out soon. This is a masterpiece. I will be subscribing to your Patreon once payday rolls around :)

Absolutely fantastic, and quickly becoming one of my favorites. I cannot wait for her to grow into the giga range and beyond.

You have a real talent for writing -- and your improvement over the original text is noticable. Improving as a writer is not easy, you should be very proud. I can't wait to read what you come up with next :)

The lack of an unaware tag, and the contents of this chapter, give me hope that extreme-size difference interactions are in store in future chapters. This is very rare in western size-fetish fiction.

Often western writers assume that someone big would have the same number of cones in their eye, thus making it so their ability to perceive objects would be the same as a normal sized human, but if their eyes have many, many cones adapted to function properly, then they would actually be able to percieve far more than the average person; it's been said that if we had a vast enough 'eye' in outer space, we would be able to see all the light from a star and actually watch its past events like you would a movie. Furthermore, much of what we believe we perceive is our brains taking a ton of data received from the body and constructing the objects we see, hear, and feel in our minds based on what the brain automatically determines as relevant or important. So, I'm hoping Ran ascends into a goddess that has the capacity to interpret and feel her followers and focus on whichever ones she's most interested in. One of my fetishes is a huge girl trying to find a teeny-tiny person.

In any case, I'll be looking forward to whatever you actually have in mind for the future chapters; I'm under the assumption you've already written everything so you can drip-feed it here without any delays. Keep up the good work~.

I was a big fan of the original, so when I saw on your DeviantArt page that you were you redoing it, I got super excited. I'm looking forward to how this redux ends!

I saw this posted and got really excited. The original is one of my favorite stories on this site. I personally never would've come up with the idea of reworking it -- why improve on perfection, after all? -- but this new story somehow managed to do so excellently so far. My only gripe is now I have to wait more days for the rest of the revamped story.