Date: December 30 2013 11:16 PM Title: The Huntress
This has always been one of my favorite stories ever.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. At the time, I intended to continue this story building on it and the preceding stories to tie them into a longer narrative. I have made progress but have not had the time to devote to writing lately.
Date: January 30 2009 7:12 PM Title: The Huntress
nice work adeline very imaginative its a pity its so short i look forward to readingfurther chapters.
Date: November 04 2008 11:37 PM Title: The Huntress
As usual, your story was excellent. i enjoyed it so much ... even if it's a pity that "poor" Jennifer had to die to allow the cops to realize the truth . congratulations!
Date: November 04 2008 4:24 AM Title: The Huntress
This yarn was going quite well but for me there was little excitement as the predator was supposed to become after swallowing her victim. Okay, she touched herself here and there but there was no follow-up - the intenseness of her galvanised libido caused by the human diet. The yarn then plodded along without further mention of libidinous pleasure by the following predators. It would also have been exciting to give some erotic description of the ogresses' bodies, etc.
[Report This]Date: November 03 2008 10:17 PM Title: The Huntress
Where have you been Adeline? I've missed your stories and thoroughly enjoyed reading this one again. ladyprey
[Report This]Date: November 03 2008 3:59 PM Title: The Huntress
ok, forgot the rating! here goes then.
Date: November 03 2008 3:57 PM Title: The Huntress
Loved it, absolutely!! brilliant details and great story line developping here! Looking forward to more from you!