[Report This]Date: May 21 2021 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 22: Natalie Cont'd
Man this is quite the adventure. Definitely looking forward to this new character, but eventually more of Jen of course.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, I'm not departing from the main narrative altogether. The title of this story is very deliberate.
Date: May 21 2021 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
Uh, is this gonna get better anytime soon? Tags had gentle, but so far all there is humiliation and abuse, and now it has extra drama.
Author's Response:
The tone of the story is set to be fairly consistent, including the humiliation stuff
[Report This]Date: May 16 2021 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Puppet Master
I love how Jennifer obviously cares a lot for jerry but still gets in plenty of humiliation and domination on him.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2021 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Puppet Master
This story is epic af. Please continue the pace and don't stop lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks johnsmith, I'm glad you enjoy it. Much more material is yet to be posted
[Report This]Date: May 11 2021 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 12: Gaining Independence
Keeps getting better and better. Love the title change as well. It fits the story perfectly.
Date: May 08 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Bath
This is just utterly incredible. I absolutely love the writing. The characters are really layered, nuanced and realistic and the gentle but humiliating domination is a erotic as Hell. Absolutely brilliant storytelling.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2021 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Bath
Wow, this is my new favorite story here. So well written. This line, in fact, the entire paragraph it exists within, is so eloquently written. -"She was in absolutely no rush to break my trance, like a cat who had just finished eating before it saw a mouse; keenly interested, but not in immediate want." I can't stress how much I hope you continue this enough. Well done!
Date: April 21 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Morning After
Great story with good character development. I hope to see more :)
Date: April 20 2021 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
Can't wait for what is to come. Hope it is just jerry and jenn in the future though
[Report This]Date: April 20 2021 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Morning After
This story is exceptional, the writing, characters, I just read all four chapters you added in a single sitting. Can't wait to see the next update :)
[Report This]Date: April 14 2021 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: The State of the World
Amazing premise, big fan of the two main characters. I see you posted a lot of 1 chapter stories just now. This is by far the best and hope you continue it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I try to make characters who are each different and memorable. I plan on continuing the stories I've posted, including this one.