Date: March 13 2023 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Dream
Really love this story! It's one of the best animal stories, hope to see you update new chapter
Date: April 30 2021 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Dream
Really, really loving this story. I've thought a lot about being reduced to a girl's beloved puppy pet and you're hitting all the right buttons :)
I think the dehumanization is a great aspect of this new relationship and her sense of protectiveness and ownership drive home the new dynamic between them. I think I'd like to see Brian finally breakthrough in communicating with Stacy, but it turning out to be all for nothing, as she exercises her natural Alpha instinct to get what she wants and to own a lesser being despite his objections. She knows better :)
[Report This]Date: April 27 2021 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Dream
Wow. The furry/turning into an animal side of things isn't something that does it for me but both this and your other story utterly nail a sense of humiliation and gentle domination that is utterly superb.
You are a fantastic writer in this genre and I hope you keep it up.
Date: April 15 2021 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Dream
First with my complaints. You need to proof read your stories.
Did you confuse points such as "I know, I only just remembered now. It’s the association. And maybe it was a long time ago, for him, but I’m still allergic, and it upset me a lot because I could have a dog, let alone getting made fun of for it as well.” with "and it upset me a lot because I could NOT have a dog,..."?
You can see the confusion in that part of your story. Is Stacy allergic to hairy dogs she can have or allergic to dogs she can not have?
That said, LOVE your story so far.
As a "shrunk to dog sized" and "transformed to her dog" aficionado I love such stories and can not wait to read your next chapter.
I myself have a dozen of man / boy to dog or puppy stories I have yet to complete. It's great to read your stories and hope to read where you are taking this one.
Seems Becky has a lot more to do with Stacy's desires with Brian than what we have been told so far.
Can't wait for the next and future chapters.
By the way, except for the grammatical errors, this is a fantastic story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback, I'm glad you like the story. You're right, the line should read 'could not'. Sorry it was confusing: Stacy is allergic to dogs but her allergy only kicked in spontaneously some years after owning a dog, so her beloved dog had to be removed and she couldn't have a dog after that. It's not only the allergy that bothers her so much but the removal of the dog and feeling forbidden from ever owning a dog again.
Becky was a one-shot character and I didn't foresee her returning to the story, and don't really have anything planned for her.