Reviewer: clems319 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2021 9:57 PM Title: Matt, the volunteer

I really love your story, very good scenarios, and written very well. I hope there will be a lot more chapters and exploration coming ! What about a trip through a mature butthole and bowels, a fun trip if we forget the smell in there ... 😃

Author's Response:

Thanks for the good feedback!  There will definitely be more, but if you had any particular ideas, scenarios or stories in mind, feel free to message me!

Reviewer: Clocked76 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2021 1:38 PM Title: Sarah, the friend

I'm not usually a fan of giant content but I liked how you did chapter 3. My favorite so far has been the nose chapter. I also loved the digestive one. I hope we can get some more nose content, or possibly some ear content or more ass 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!  As of right now I'm don't think I have any other nose chapters planned for this story, but that can change.  I've definitely got an ear chapter planned and maybe some more ass.

 

Feel free to message me if you had any ideas for chapters! 

Reviewer: bubsboy81 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2021 3:40 PM Title: Sarah, the friend

Love the concept of this story! Would love to see a more detailed description of Amy traveling through the full digestive system of someone (patient or otherwise). 

Author's Response:

Thanks!  And I'm working on something like that for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2021 3:07 AM Title: Sarah, the friend

Good so far! Hope to see more like this.

Couple of thoughts:

1. I find it hard to believe she'd leave the sub in such a scenario - surely she knows she's safer inside it, and that it's the only way she can re-grow, and given the amount of size she has inside (multiple rooms, enough for a whole crew), it seems unlikely she'd run metres (her size) to jump out into more danger.

2. If the sub can't be regrown inside a person (for obvious safety reasons - good inclusion for world building), then it might be interesting to expand this to say it has sensors preventing it from regrowing in any area too small, which might provide a way for normal-sized characters to force the protagonist to stay small in the sub, or as a threat to make her change it to be smaller etc.

Looking forward to chapter 2!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback.  I really like the idea of the sub having sensors to prevent it from growing back in too small of a place.  Will definitely incorporate that moving forward!