[Report This]Date: February 16 2023 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great erotic and fun story of Dr. Cooper manipulating her horny prey (in this case, a student) into allowing himself get put into a position to be eaten. The trust/betrayal angle is top notch. I agree with Xiao's review - this could easily become a series - just gotta come up with different ideas for the good Dr.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2021 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really fun story! You certainly do well in instilling the emotional state of the prey in the reader. Even though I knew full well what to expect for the poor guy, your depiction of Dr. Copper and her wiles is so thrilling! You may or may not have intended for this, but between her seeming "selection" process of this particular horndog and her "powers of suggestion" put on display in your other story: "a disappointed fiancée's hunger," Dr. Madeleine Cooper gives me subtle Dr. Hannibal Lecter vibes. Using knowledge of human psychology to manipulate people into doing what they want out of sheer interest and an unconventional appetite? Unintended parallel? Either way. I love her as a predator. The whole "therapist vore" thing has been done before to good effect. But Dr. Cooper is a fun twist on it. A repeat offender. You could get some serious mileage out of her before it became repetitive by tapping into different psychological scenarios. Hypnotism. Reverse psychology. Etc etc. I digress. Great work! Love your writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the kind words and thoughtful feedback!
I didn't consciously base Dr. Cooper on Hannibal Lector, but they both definitely follow a similar tradition: manipulative, self-serving therapists who use their savvy to get their helpless patients to do what they want them to. That's definitely one element of what makes her such a good pred for me, but the other is the level of trust that patients (or a student, in this case) are meant to place in their therapist. A therapist is supposed to be someone you can put absolute trust in and be emotionally vulnerable in front of, and she abuses that to manipulate and eat them for the sake of her own sex drive! It's such fertile ground for betrayal scenarios.
If you like Dr. Cooper, you simply must read The Shrink by BunnyWrites (and several other amazing stories she'll be posting in the future). We came up with the character together, but I credit Bunny with doing the legwork in developing her deliciously cruel, uncaring, lustful personality. That story is Madeleine at her best, and from the sound of things you would absolutely love it. Tell Bunny I sent you!
thanks again for the wonderful review :)