Reviewer: jay123652 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2021 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Where It Went Wrong

Very well written. Totaly love unware stories, especially when there is feet involved. also like the chewing gum part.

would be interesting to see flash backs of his struggles when he was a bigger size around 3-4 inches. maybe end up being trapped in his mom's slippers and her being oblivous to it and continuing her chores. Or maybe even dinner table shenanigans where he gets trapped on the dinner table and is unnoticed by his sisters (ultimately ends up underneath with all their feet).

I would enjoy a story where he is a bigger size (3-6 inches )and not just a small size. However i do love your stories.

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2021 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Where It Went Wrong

Absolutely amazing, always great to read an unaware story, I wish there were more like it!

 

Do you intend on finishing the story here? If so, would you ever consider an alternate ending where he us crushed slowly under one of their bare feet, perhaps inside a shoe or being played with underfoot during shoeplay? 

Author's Response:

Thank you!! I always -intend- on finishing a story but if you look at my others I tend to just not, oops. To be honest I've been a fan of actual crushing (as in they are crushed and die) but I won't say I'll never do an alternate thing like that. If people like I can try.

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2021 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Where It Went Wrong

This is very well written. I can really sense the scale between the siblings. And what I love more is, it is sister/brother themed. I especially love the feet part. 

 

I hope there would be more of this story but it looks like it's just a single chapter. Still, thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you!! There's more coming...eventually.