Date: October 31 2008 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhh what a grand story, thanks man for sticking to the sole action, loved it.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. I plan on writing a sequel--this time, Maria's actions would be more "deliberate"!
[Report This]Date: October 26 2008 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, at least, Sasha didn't have her way, entirely! A sort of happy ending I can live with. Although, if you ever do write a sequel, I wouldn't mind seeing Sasha experiencing some poetically just payback. ;-D
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments, Carycomic!
[Report This]Date: October 26 2008 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
That didn't go as well as either Jake (the fictional one) or I might have hoped. But, at least, Maria didn't squash him, summarily.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2008 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm! If I were Jake, I would just lie about telling Maria what Sasha wants him to say. After all; a promise made under duress isn't legally binding, in any way/shape/form.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2008 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Jake! I'm beginning to wonder if Sasha's actions are due to her being a man-hating lesbian? As in; wanting Maria all to herself.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2008 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Uh-oh! Now, the real trouble begins.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2008 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Heh! B.S., it isn't personal!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2008 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
This kind of story is right up my alley! I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to find out what happens when Maria learns of her tiny shoe prisoner!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!