[Report This]Date: September 13 2024 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have been a long time lurker on this site for a while. Lot's of great stories out there, but this one has always been one of my favorites.
The storyline is amazing and flows together so well. It keeps a great balance of erotic and storytelling. I still come back to reread it all the time beginning to end. Such a shame this is a dead story and we haven't gotten anything from this writer in forever. But that is life sometimes.
Wish I could find out how the rest of it progresses, but I highly recommend this read if you are into micro type stories. Even with no resolution, you should still find it a good read.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2022 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 19
I would love to see some inshoe stuff
[Report This]Date: April 08 2021 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome so far
Date: March 30 2021 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Man this is fantastic, can't believe I never found this story before but it's actually in the running for my favorite on the site, it just hits so many of the right buttons for me. Nothing is hotter than Cheryl stealing Mark's girl and insinuating he's single now and basically homewrecking the tiny unwilling couple. Interested to see what happens with Emily and Mark now also, I love the idea that she wants to break him down until he's happy to be her pet (which I imagine is the same plan Cheryl has for Abby.)
I actually found this story using the M/m size role filter so I'm hoping we get at least a splash of that soon, though I can't complain at all about how things went so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I'm still wondering whether to pick this up but yes I did have intention for M/m content so maybe we'll see. I've got another week or so until I have a break so I may crack at it then :)
Date: March 25 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh man I hope you update this story, it's one of my favourites on this site!
Author's Response:
Haha, I rememebr you well Nostory! I may very well update the story again very soon! Good to see you again :)
Date: March 24 2021 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my GOSH YOU'RE BACK!
This was legit one of my earliest favorite stories, I was obsessed with this and used to check it weekly to see if you'd upload another chapter. Chapter 13 was and still is one of the top 3 writing pieces on this site. I pretty much have that memorized. SO GLAD TO SEE AN IMPOSSIBLE UPDATE TO THIS
Author's Response:
I didn't seem to get a strong response from the story from what I remember so I just lost interest. However, looking to see how this goes, I may continue it further. Reviews and star ratings keep me motivated, as shallow as that may seem. Glad to see someone remembers the story, very encouraging!