[Report This]Date: August 05 2021 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 6: Maybe she went too far
Hopeful for the next part. Bravo!
[Report This]Date: June 12 2021 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 6: Maybe she went too far
love the story, great idea! got a couple "tinder matches" id love to sugest for your next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Please let me know about those ideas! My plan is to get some cock vore for the next chapter ;)
Date: March 23 2021 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 3: First dates are never forgotten
Nice story. I quite enjoy it.is it bad that in the future I hope they do this again, only for the condom to break, but instead of being bummed into the womb, that the tiny guy ends up being unawared cockvored. Especially if he ends up releasing him inside another unaware woman, and his wife after finding him with the app, gets him by having lesbian sex where she eats out the other girl, and swallows him as well, all with the others completely unaware due to the tiny size. Probably wishful thinking. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry I'm not into cockvore, but I will try to make something fore the condom breaking part and getting lost somewhere else! Thanks for your review!
Date: March 22 2021 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
I really enjoyed the chapters.
I like the description of what heroism feels like.(I really like how you describe the details).
Luckily, the cervix wasn't hungry and ate it (And he didn't end up in her womb.) :)
Please continue .
I'm sorry, my English is bad. :(
Author's Response:
Not into womb thingies either (as I said in another review), sorry! but I will continue, that's for sure. Thank you for your review
Date: March 20 2021 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Interesting start. Please continue.
Author's Response:
Will do for sure! Just give me time as I work full time and this may take some weeks to finish.
I also like positive criticism: any orthographic mistake, any way to express things better, just tell me so I improve me & the story!