If it ever hits u I would like a proper follow up seeing Evie and Tina being a good master and pet

I'm not lying when I say this is one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. I wouldn't change a single word of this.

I loved the original story. Particularly the way it ended, that Evie became so submissive and loved her new life. 

I don't really understand the new summer story. It's back when Eva tries to escape. We know this doesn't happen so I'm curious as to why you chose that timeline? 

This story was amazing from start to finish, thank you for writing it! 

Do you think we'd ever see a potential short spin-off about Eva being the one to shrink Tina? 

Superb storytelling and character development!

That's the most likely way the rest of the story goes since we are in the denouement. I'd accept that if it wasn't for my old friend Ensign Chekov... I mean Anton Chekhov.


Chekhov's gun demands that something be done with the voice telling Evie that she's still Eva.
It was small enough in the previous chapter to not even get a line of dialogue. It could have been a throwaway If left at that. It's in force in this chapter until Tina pays attention.

Likewise, the last few chapters have shown the was in Tina between her evil
and her guilt/concern.

And, Tina makes Eva promise to behave.

That's just this chapter.

I'll be disappointed when none of those ducks hunt. The story could have and probably should have ended in the previous chapter if that's all there is to it. It's too well written for 3 superfluous chapters.

I've given up trying to figure this story out. Who hurt you asterisk? /s Blink with one eye if you need help.

Dana clearly isn't coming to the rescue though. Every chapter where nebulously large amounts of time pass (weeks, months, years?)and we haven't seen any action from Dana despite Amy putting it together immediately, is starting to strain credulity a bit for me. At this point, I can only imagine she figured it out and decided to throw Eva under the bus for the company. How much time has passed anyway?

Is Tina about to do something stupid? Making Eva promise to behave sounds like she's about to do something stupid. Please let her do something stupid. It already seems like Tina is having Eva larger than 1 inch while at work if Eva can type on a tablet. A one inch woman wouldn't be large enough to reach further than the space bar on any touch keyboard I've ever seen.

Can we just have the last 2 chapters? This is torture.

Author's Response:

Okay, that got a pretty real laugh out of me. 

The story could end right here. Tina's goal was to put a bully in her place, and that's been fully accomplished. Remmeber when people (myself included) thought that Eva would shrink Tina? How far we've come from that.

But something's going to happen to upend everything, and it's going to come from two people. Amy and Dana have been doing something that we haven't seen because we're seeing everything from Tina's perspective. Amy is manipulating Tina toward some end that it unknown to us because Tina is too childlike to realize that Amy's friendliness is a facade. Dana probably suspects Tina, and with the help of the police officer we saw earlier, is about to spring into action and take Tina down. Earlier in the story, Amy figured out that Tina used the shrinker, because Tina didn't recharge it. It's likely that Dana knows about that too. However, I doubt that Dana and Amy are working together - they have opposite goals, and so they'll probably be in conflict.

One last thing to note is that we haven't actually seen Dana work with the police. Normally, when someone does something wrong at a business, the business fixes the problem internally as much as possible, and only gets the police involved when it's unavoidable. If a company's been embezzled or defrauded, for example, the money lost to the crime is far less than the lost stock value if it became public knowledge. In this case, Dana has an interest in making sure that the public never associates kidnapping, rape and torture with her company, and the public could find out if it appears in a police report. Or maybe Dana wants to see Tina criminally charged. We'll see.

So now we know what becomes of Eva. I think it's a testament to her strength that she isn't in even worse shape after a weekend of solitary confinement. But what becomes of Tina? I see two ways this can go:

1) No one discovers Eva and finds out Tina's been doing, even though Tina has clear flaws, in that she'll do worse things than Eva ever did, and that her child-like mind is easily manipulated by people who put on a friendly facade. If this happened, then the story would end with the message that you can have all those flaws and win without doing anything about them.

2) Tina's exposed, by Dana and/or the police. The story would establish that Tina has her own major problems, and was brought down by them.

3) Tina has her own transformation at the last minute, and gets Dana and the police off her trail.

From what I've seen of the story so far, 1) seems like the least likely, and 3) seems contrived and rushed. 2) is the most consistent with what I've read.

I do not question Eva's breakdown. It is your sudden descision to make this al to easy and this advantage out of nowhere with zero consequences for the parties carrying this out is absurd. Never tested it on other humans before of shrinking to atomic size is safe, but somehow everything works out.
Just fire at the floor and only Eva grows, nothing else. With this sudden deus ex machina its to easy. Its so overkill in advantage and feels cheap/unearned.

Its like paralyzing someone after enough other torture leave them on the floor and than say after a few days when returning. 
“Wow, you couldn’t even cross one floor tile huh?”

That is what I mean, that she acts like Eva was just put in the naughty corner. Where does that false pride come from?

What would happen if I put someone in total isolation for a few days? Wow, what effort, what skill. This is acuired to easy with zero consequences. Now all of a sudden everything fall into place and Tina gets the exact behavior she wants.