Date: June 26 2021 7:17 PM Title: Back to Work
This development steps up the tension nicely. Previously, it was a question of when and how the two will mentally break. Tina was safe in every other way. Now, Dana is showing concern for Eva, which seems to have caught Tina by surprise. This could lead to an interesting parallel, where both Eva and Tina get in trouble because they misread their co-workers. This story could go in a lot of interesting directions.
Also, I personally like a long chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2021 10:55 AM Title: Back to Work
Very intelligent chapter again.
Its detailed process of everything and everyone involved makes it interesting to see every interesting detail unfold in this timeline.
Eva gets an interesting ride and with the increasing pressure of being captive more and more will break more layers of her.
Tina must keep in mind all the logistics of Eva being missing longer and longer from work as time progresses.
I have a feeling that Dana already suspects something and I can't but help that Tina has the in some parts the wrong idea about Dana's relationship with Eva.
Dana's interesting questioning and showing concern, is another interesting layer Tina must deal with.
I find it interesting that this chapters mentions Tina's promotion and that is Eva's old job. But you didn't reveal if Eva also gets promoted or that Tina will be above her.
But both those options will give an interesting path for the story.
The point is why this is exciting to know is that even how bad Eva could be, what Dana did felt as somewhat of a betrayel of a friend.
If Dana promotes Eva too, than I can believe the friendship. If Eva is being demoted, than Dana's goals are clear that this wasn't a one time action.
I like it how Tina seems somewhat oblivious to that for now.
I love all these processes you set in motion and how detailed you describe every emotion and the logistics of it all.
Author's Response:
As ever, thanks for the kind words!
I will point out Eva was fired just before she got shrunken down, however. Dana was the one who did it. Not because she wanted to, but because Eva's behavior was too unacceptable for the company. That's why there's an opening for Tina now.
Date: June 21 2021 10:44 PM Title: Time for Change
It is, unbelievably funny that at the end of the day Eva's less upset about what Tina's doing and more upset that she's on the receiving end of things. Its not quiiiite just deseets because Tina's clearly on the verge of some mental breaking point, but it definitely keeps Eva from ever getting too sympathetic.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2021 12:06 AM Title: What Should've Been
Very interesting that she had this dream. Maybe that is exactly what awaits her with Tina, but roles reversed.
You leave it to the reader to interpret what Tina means with the words, "Ready for work".
I don't think she can exactly have what Eva had in her dream, but when Eva is missing long enough, would people suspect or care. Dana would find out quick and is smart. She is much smarter than Eva.
Love seeing Eva go through all that what has already been done and what you have in store. I like the very realistic and detailed way how people come to the desicions they make. That there are realistic logistical rules and natural rules in your universe makes this story so interesting.
Another mental blow for Eva could be that he no showing causes her to be fired.
I like how Tina is thinking alot about every step she takes alot and possible consequences on many levels.
Her psysical and mental jabs towards Eva you have in such good interesting balance as time progresses. Both are interesting, the subtle jabs more on a mental level that at first seem not that big, but hit hard when you think about it the more time progresses, are the most interesting ones to me.
I wonder if Tina let other people in on the secret and let them interact with Eva and what friends and family Tina and Eva have much later in the story.
It makes this story such an interesting journey of exploration on so many levels.
I care for the characters so far. Well done.
Author's Response:
As ever, time shall tell haha. Quite happy you are enjoying speculating though.
Date: June 19 2021 11:51 AM Title: What Should've Been
@LovableTable: There's room for a dream of revenge later...
Date: June 18 2021 11:05 PM Title: What Should've Been
Remains one of the best stories going. Was really hoping to see Eva shrinking her enemies with plenty of cruelty from her when this first started, but I've come around to her being abused, mainly because Tina has been very well written.
But I'd be lying if I said this alternate reality/dream chapter didn't scratch an itch for me.
Author's Response:
The bait and switch did leave some folks disappointed I'm sure haha, but happy this chapter helped alleviate that!
Date: June 18 2021 7:52 PM Title: What Should've Been
This sort of alternative universe chapter is fun. It shows good stuff that you wouldn't see otherwise.
Going forward, it seems like there's going to be an ongoing misunderstanding. Eva made a lot of bad assumptions about what Tina was doing and what the others at the office were thinking. Eva still hasn't figured out that Tina didn't betray her the way she thinks, and that could have a big impact on how Eva perceives her situation and changes her outlook.
Author's Response:
Not gonna say a word haha. Time shall tell how it all plays out. Happy you liked it though!
[Report This]Date: June 12 2021 12:28 PM Title: Home Invasion
Very good writing again.
Very good with the psychological details.
There is so much more going on than simple humiliation.
Both characters work well of eachother.
The balance in this story is very good.
Your timing from subtle humialiation to something harder and the constant thoughts of each character makes this a real treat.
Tina really struggles in very interesting detail how to properly dish out justice, punishment or revenge.
Eva only partly breaks and not in a fast enough pace which forces Tina to take more drastic measures. Part of it she finds fun, but some borders she crosses reluctantly.
The visiting of Eva's house is brilliant.
Eva has shown at some point she broke, but you can see it is not at the exact level of breaking Tina want.
Tina has to walk on a small cord to get her exact satisfaction throughout the whole process.
I love the hints you leave behind in the so many details and even the smallest little details. Very enjoyable.
Eva will maybe loose more of her sanity as the physical abuse and isolation/boredom continues and will therefor slowly give in more and more to the simple demands without getting mad, only figthing against the more extremer abuse trying to manage it.
Tina's mental state is also on the line as Eva's exact behavior we have seen from her as a tiny, is putting Tina off. Not getting the expected satisfaction she forces herself to go more extreme not to loose face against Eva.
I cannot put it in exact words, but Eva, not intentional, is dealing serious mental blows to Tina. Eva stubborness forces Tina to be a much bigger bully and the longer this goes on the more Tina will cross borders. This fact doesn't sit well with Tina.
I wonder what the end result will be for both of them after this intimite journey. This is a story of very many details. Change only a few of them and you have a different story.
A story like this takes a lot of effort to get the desired balance in this story.
Apologies, I see I'm repeating my self sometimes in the review. It is just a very good story for me so far. :)
Author's Response:
Oh no not at all haha. I love seeing your comments. This story doesn't generally get a lot of them so it can be hard to tell if I did alright or if it's not clicking. Your comments are the primary feedback I've been getting and it's been nice seeing someone put so much thought reflecting on the story, and I'm happy you enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: June 06 2021 7:29 AM Title: The Other Side
I read all the chapters again. Looking forward to more of this super interesting story.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2021 9:07 PM Title: The Other Side
What make your story so interesting is the details in feelings, motives, the detailed logistics.
Too many writers make stuff completely too easy for one party with out consequences for actions, but you go in depth how this would feel for the characters and that they also have to deal with real life.
The love the see the passage of time and how the people at work will react too and when she is gone missing long.
I like that Tina is a good fine girl and exploring this creative path finding the sweet spot of dishing out humiliating punishment. Their banter was already interesting and good timing. Even the smallest actions have subtle consequences, good nuances. Its is going to be an interesting game inside Tina's house, at work and outside as the passsage of time makes it more interesting.
Author's Response:
Very flattered to hear that! A lot of this definitely focuses on the reasoning and impact of decisions. To the point I often worry if there's enough Size in this Size Story, but people seem to like it and that makes me glad.
[Report This]Date: May 29 2021 3:47 PM Title: Restraint
Very good, would wonder if Tina decides to look up online all the things a giatness can do to a tiny so she can plan for for things to do to Eva. See how a tiny person works as an insol, is it better in wedges boots or flats etc., dress Eva up idall cloths if she had any, see how long she lats while inserted and Tina just going about her day. Or shrink some other items, like som used car in junk yart of something, just to see how crushing works, as much as the durability is notably increased. And of coude have Evainside whille its happening. Or a to be demolished house she can shink and make Eva smaller to fit in it and try stuff with.
Also think you might have had intended to post something today on the 29th, when the last one got posted on 27th, so maybe you missed something.
[Report This]Date: May 27 2021 7:48 PM Title: Restraint
Again, very good writing.
I love this subtle smart interaction, smart nuances. There is a lot of thought put into it so far and I love it.
The whole setting is interesting. Many things play a factor, but I won't mention it to ruin the fun for others. Its an interesting game and I find Tiny an interesting character as how she behaves. Realistic thinking about every action she takes and what it means and the feelings. Eva unpurposly behaves just in a way that makes it diffucult for Tina. Not getting the kind of type of control or satisfaction that she wants.
Her sense of justice and lust for this new sensation are struggeling constantly. Super al these smart nuances throughout the whole story with these characters.
Thanks for doing your best and putting much tought and effort in your story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, it's nice to hear feedback like that. I worry a lot about the finer details in this story haha.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2021 3:18 PM Title: Time for Change
It is still interesting. I love the balance of all this and what people have to be carefull of in real life in this setting.
Love the details and nuance. How they both think about stuff anf than make a descision.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope to keep that up.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2021 5:58 AM Title: A Fresh Start
This chapter was so good! Especially the dialogue, it was so well written, natural, and fun to read. I loved the last sentence "Miss Tina." that was such a good closer. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy to hear you liked it!
Date: May 16 2021 7:46 AM Title: Alone at Last
"I wanna break you". I was thinking Tina was going to give some frank treatment to Eva; humiliate her, break her down mentally, and build her back up while developing some kind of relationship with her. Now I'm starting to worry Tina's just a giddy girl with no plan to eventually restore Eva and instead just wants to turn her into a hopeless and broken toy permanently and is going to be pretty cruel on the journey doing it. Durability might be a big safety net, but she immediately went to stomping and grinding Eva's body. Curious to see how Tina reacts when Eva finally breaks from abuse/pain. Glee in breaking her will and turning her into a robotic toy or fanatical pet for the remanider of her time, or a switch to caring/nuturing while she builds her back up into someone different and restores her or keeps her as a little friend.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2021 4:54 PM Title: Alone at Last
this story is reall good written. a lot of autors on here are just writing for a quick cum moment. but this is really well done. love it.
[Report This]Date: May 14 2021 4:38 PM Title: Time for Change
Very nicely written so far with all those details.
Date: May 06 2021 6:03 PM Title: Heart to Heart (This is where the size starts)
And it's happened! Now we get to see how Tina changes, filtered through Eva's perspective.
Date: May 04 2021 6:53 AM Title: Turnabout
Who shrinks who? It's been established that Tina has the motivation and willpower to shrink Eva, but Eva still has the need for vengeance to shrink Tina. And how? The last we heard, the shrinking technology doesn't work on humans, so one of them is going to reveal that they know something that the other doesn't.
Author's Response:
Who knows? Guess we'll see.
Date: April 30 2021 9:40 PM Title: Turnabout
Yay, fuck her, she's fired.
A wet dream you'd wish would happen in real life to these people.