[Report This]Date: April 20 2021 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great story!
I too love the premiss. Well written and so evil. She uses him against his will, but somehow always manages to rationalize her actions.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2021 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the best stories out there. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Amazing job by any standards, and this is only your first story so I'm amazed at it! I'm especially lookign forward to the next chapter. Really love Emily! Love here past experiance, 2 days lol the poor guy, but so hot
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! That means a lot :) originally the story was meant to be a lot more Daisy focused but I just loved how Paul and Emily played of each other.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2021 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I never read an humiliation like that before! I feel bad for that poor man, he clearly loves her, but she's so detached from his feelings, making him shave her, so that another guy gets in her panties...
I also think Daisy is the bright one here. She just tricked Emily into giving up the tiny guy to her, so that she can play with.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your kind words. I had long searched for a story with these themes but could never find one on here, so that's why I decided to write one myself. Glad you are enjoying it!
Date: March 20 2021 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Off to a great start. Daisy sounds a lot more experienced so I'm sure Emily would benefit greatly from some hands on lessons!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words!
I'm honestly not entirely sure about hands on yet (depends on how it develops), but she will definitely help Emily overcome her hesitations.
Date: March 18 2021 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story, can Paul be smaller?
Author's Response:
Yes! I'll add some of that to the next chapter :)
Date: March 18 2021 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story and I liked the premise. It was a nice first night but it would be cool to see another chapter. Maybe the can give the app another try and she'll keep him small for the weekend and try so other settings in the app.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I just noticed that you also wrote a story in a similar universe, I'll also check it out :D
She will definetely give the app another try in the next chapter and maybe Daisy will as well ;)