Right off the bat, thank you so much! Nothing quite like seeing a review of this size with such a plesant start! 

And thank you again! If you had read any of my other stories, you might be less surprised at the length to my chapters. It's more of a rule than an anomaly! I don't know, it just takes a lot of prose to articulate the feelings I want to be understood in these situations on the part of all parties involved. If I'm to be writing "smut with a plot" at the end of the day, I'd at least like it to all make sense! Anyway, if everyone got reviews half as long as this one even half as often as they deserved, they'd probably feel more inclined to pouring a little more TLC into their stories here! So thanks for taking the time! 

Chapter One with Monica was originally conceived to be a rather short introduction to the methodology of story telling. Like an "intro kill" to a horror flick to let you know what you're in for. But I decided to draw it out and make it a worthwhile tale almost on its own before the reader was aware of what was really going on. It was a difficult balance to strike, but I enjoyed its conception and growth.

Ashley is a contrast to Monica in many ways. She wants to do a lot of stuff besides vore, and to her, it's a much finer line between what would be desirable in fantasy and reality. Joseph will learn a lot from this encounter. I hope you enjoy the rest! And I wanted you to feel a little bad for Joseph in a few of the chapters I've outlined. It's all part of it. Don't worry about him too much. He kinda asked for it! 

I too have always been a big fan of panty entrapment and realized that I've written about it sorely little if even at all! (This story gives me ample opportunity to check off a few boxes if you catch my drift!) 

There was a meaning for heads! I'll get to that. You'll see. ;) 

I'm glad you liked the dildo scene. It's a good thing Joseph has been imbued with such strength! And even at his size, I thought the plug would be an excellent touch. Gotta ensure he stays put till morning! 

It does take a lot of work to write these, but the main reason for that is I outline each idea and then sit on them for a while, and in that time, my brain kind of sets up and refines all of the ideas, and I make some last minute decisions right before I pretty much write it all out at once. That's why they are all sort of packed with content. By the time I'm actually writing, I'm just making sure I didn't forget anything. I'm trying to make this story a "predictable surprise." Wherein you're refreshed by what you didn't see coming and satisfied by what you did. 

Feel free to make suggestions if you do determine I'm missing something direly. And thank you again for the wonderful words! Stay tuned for the next chapter! 

That's great to hear! I'm really glad it was gripping all the way throughout as I was a little concerned I was taking a little too much time getting to the "good parts," but I'm personally of the mind that the good parts are better after being thoroughly built up to by good situational dialog. 

I'm already working on the next chapter. Thank you so much for the positive words! It means a lot to me and helps motivate me to keep doing this. 

Good to be back! Ya know? In some ways, I never left. (Lol) 

And I could always stand to add more detail SOMEWHERE, but this was originally meant to be just a brief setup for the situation and it turned into 12K+ words. But I assure you, there will be plenty of opportunities for more detail later. It's a perfectly fair concern. Lol. Be it in words or drawings, we all love our internals. ;) 

thank you for your reading and your review! I've begun work on the next chapter! 

And I'm very sorry, but I won't be doing that.