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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2021 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 Changes are Afoot

The points you are making are spot on.
The realistic setting and problems, etc.

For me this is more true good horror, than the over the top giantess story with unrealistic trasitions or behavior patterns. Because it is so subtle, but loosing your job and being humiliated like that and knowing this will stay and increase.


Hope you get your flow again.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I actually did get into a nice rhythm.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2021 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 Changes are Afoot

Your story touches very realistic topics. Very well done. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Although I felt that this chapter wasn't my best. I hadn't had a chance to work on it in about a month, and I felt I lost the flow.

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