[Report This]Date: March 08 2021 12:50 AM Title: Revelations
I can't wait for the next chapter! That last bit of information has gotten my hopes up, even if it might cause future conflict. I feel like restoring Brian's size would benefit both Brian and Allie since Allison would actually get to express her affection for Brian without having to worry about how fragile he is. Brian would actually be able to return Allison's affection at a much more noticeable level (nothing beats being able to embrace your girlfriend tbh). Not to mention I feel like being full size would facilitate the reunion between Brian and his sister. I can only hope that Allison wasn't keeping anything from him on purpose because it would break my heart to watch my favorite couple have another lover's quarrel. However I'm sure that whatever it is that you have planned will be great! As always, you have my full attention!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the reveal, as well as the possibilities for the future that it opens up. I just uploaded the next chapter, so I hope you enjoy it! Thanks again for reading.
-Pluto
Date: March 07 2021 4:58 AM Title: Revelations
"The shrinking is permanent" "No it isn't". Called it! So either Professor Elizabeth has a deep knowledge of the system or Allison is about to cause a crisis of faith in Brian over keeping him in the dark about restoring him. I wonder if Elizabeth's plan is to smuggle Brian back to a SPAR facility or if she knows about other shrinking chambers at research labs or government divisions.
Author's Response:
You certainly did! Yeah, there are a lot of ways in which this knowledge could be influencing Elizabeth's future plans. I hope you enjoy finding out what happens!
-Pluto
Date: March 06 2021 11:18 PM Title: Revelations
Oh what a brilliant revelation!!! i have to say i grinned when i read the last line! I can't wait to see what may happen in the future under those potential "different" circumstances! brian and allies relationship may indeed go off the charts!
Great writing as always! thank you for this continuation!
Author's Response:
It's my pleasure, I'm glad you enjoyed this development! Your reviews certainly influenced the decision, so I hope you enjoy the way it affects the rest of the story!
-Pluto
Date: March 01 2021 3:02 PM Title: The Big Reveal
Wow, I'm surprised you started on the sequel so soon. I can't help but feel like Elizabeth almost revealed to Brian and us that shrinking isn't permanent anymore or never was and that Brian can be restored if his name is cleared with a certain well placed quip:““Nonsense, honey,” Elizabeth responded dismissively. “You’re still you, even if you’re small. And besides, it’s not like the shrinking is-” “Here we go,” Allison interrupted."
I still can't shake the feeling that Professor Dawson knows more about the world and is moving pieces behind the scenes. If it's true that shrinking can be reversed how would she know? In her mental musings Allison believes shrinking to be irreversable and it seems odd if an ex-Chevalier wouldn't hear about it in work rumors or gossip. I could just be over-reading into the good professor's attempts at smoothing out Brian's fear and resentment. I think there's a very good chance Brian will be forced into staying alone with Elizabeth if they catch wind of authorities investigating Alison on a tip from Cathy or general government monitoring. A chance to see if there's more to her nature then pure Samaritan goodness when left alone with Brian.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm pretty surprised myself. I hope you find it interesting, as I really appreciate your detailed thoughts!
I think you'll find that there's a lot of mystery and deception surrounding the SP. I hope you'll like how it ends up affecting Allison and Brian, as well as finding out if Elizabeth has anything to do with it!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: March 01 2021 12:42 PM Title: The Big Reveal
Simply amazing, it read like it was fun to write. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! Yeah, new character dynamics are always fun. I hope you enjoy how it develops!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: February 27 2021 6:38 AM Title: The Big Reunion
I'm with Allie on this, Elizabeth deserves to know. Unless of course it's all a giant ruse, in which case -shame on you Elizabeth!
Author's Response:
Allison and Brian are going to have that debate in the next chapter, so I hope you enjoy how it turns out! Should be out pretty soon. And yeah, that would be pretty messed up. Thanks for reading!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: February 27 2021 5:16 AM Title: Looking Forward
It's honestly fantastic to have you and this story back!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really appreciated your reviews of the last story, so I'm really glad to have you back as well. I hope you enjoy where it goes from here!
-Pluto
Date: February 26 2021 1:40 AM Title: Looking Forward
I am pleased to see this is getting a continuation. I cannot recall the last time I got hooked on a story until I came across your title. It even pushed me to start my own story (though it is not as complex as yours is, that's for sure) Looking forward to the future updates!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I really appreciate your kind words, and I'm glad that you're happy to see a sequel.
Also, I'm incredibly honored that my story helped you decide to start writing your own!!! That makes me so happy to hear. Writing has proven to be a wonderful experience for me, so I hope that it brings you happiness as well. I truly hope that you will keep it up, and I'll be sure to give your story a read!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: February 23 2021 11:37 AM Title: Looking Forward
I'm so happy this story will have a second part! Be not afraid to publish, I will read it even if you would have decided to avoid any sexual content at all, for the sole purpose of the story :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad to see more reviews from you, and I'm really happy that you are enjoying the story beyond the sexual content. There definitely will be some, but hopefully it will come across as natural to the story, as opposed to including it just for the sake of including it. I hope you enjoy where we go from here!
-Pluto
Date: February 23 2021 7:59 AM Title: Looking Forward
By far the most pleasent surprise I've had in a while. At first when I saw the name of the story I thought it was going to be a fan made continuation, but seeing your penname made me smile with excitement!
I'm really glad you decided to continue the story, especially in a gentle way that explores the depths of this micro/macro relationship. I believe I mentioned in one of my reviews of the first story that I usually read the cruel crush/torture type of stories much more, but your story is by far one of my favorite on the site right now, especially due to the gentle factor!
Can't wait to see how this story unfolds, and don't sweat the chapters too much, you have all the time in the world!
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing again! I'm really glad to hear that this was a pleasant surprise for you. I'm pretty surprised myself that I'm choosing to do this, considering how I felt after completing the last story. Like I said, though, I've had an unexpected flood of ideas since then.
I really appreciate you saying that this is one of your favorites at the moment! That means a lot. I tremendously enjoy gentle stories, so I'm glad that I can share that enjoyment with you through this story, even if it's not normally what you would read. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: February 23 2021 4:51 AM Title: Looking Forward
This has got to be one of them most interesting and mature stories on this website. Going so far as to explore his abuse and affect on his relationship and sexuality. Interesting stuff. Take your time, but please do continue, I'm hooked lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad to have you back, and that you're finding these elements of the story to be interesting. I'm taking notes from what people responded strongly to in the last story, as well as what I find interesting to write, and going from there. I hope you enjoy how it progresses!
-Pluto