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Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2021 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not being an english speaker, the seaman style of the introduction discouraged me at first, but I've read the chapter and was worth it. It's fun! I hope the muscle tag will not be the main focus here, but that's just my personal taste :)



Author's Response:

Oh I just tossed that muscle tag in there just to be safe. They don't all start hulking out

Reviewer: vicgiantessadmirer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2021 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Trees. Women. Trees. Women. I started to chuckle. I like this, although, I do hope poor Tomas makes it out alright. I never quite liked the idea of someone not into the fetish dying from it.

Author's Response:

He dies terribly, on the very first sentence of the very next chapter. Wish there was something I could've done to prevent that.

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