Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2022 5:38 PM Title: A Meeting of Minds

Imagine not just settling with someone like Emily. Why would you want anyone else if you have pocket girl that revers you.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2021 7:38 PM Title: Epilogue

Pretty good. 

I do hope we get a sequal, with Jodie willingly becoming shrunk and living in some flats for a while. Angie could obvously out the ring in her toe so Jodie is autohealed. And other girls might willingly want in. 

Theres also some opertinity to see if other things can be shrunk by the ring, like plants, that way she couod make a pitri dish ecosystem, if it's posible. 

Author's Response:

That was one of two ideas I had floating around in my head,  with the other one being a prequel  featuring Duncan and some of his other unfortunate victims, though I do think the sequel has more potential. 

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2021 4:39 AM Title: Bitter Rivalry

I have been seriously enjoying this story so far. I love it! 

I am leaving this review to say that I loved this chapter, and I'm kinda hope that Emily gets her happy ending. 

Like, I hope that Angie and Faith are able to escape, but I also think that Emily's submission and devotion to Duncan is really cute (in a totally fucked-up way), and I want her to be able to have her twisted happily ever after with him. 

I also think that Duncan is obviously awful, and basically I don't think he deserves a girl like Emily. However, this chapter had some really interesting developments that I liked. Given that fact that he's never given up Emily and the fact that he actually trusts her enough to grow her to her normal size and make love to her tells me that there might be more to how he sees Emily than meets the eye. So part of me hopes that Emily's devotion might help him be a little better, at least to her. 

I don't know. I guess I just really hope that Emily gets what she wants in the end, which obviously includes Duncan having his power.

I guess we'll see lol. Just had to put it out there! 

 

In any case, I still think that you're a fantastic writer! Keep it up! ^^ 

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I was really happy with how this chapter turned out.  I got to flesh out a few characters who up to this point really hadn't gotten much of a day in the sun.  Since next chapter is going to start putting the pieces of the puzzle together that I've been putting in place, I wanted this one to be more character-driven.  I'm glad that this decision has been so well-received!

 

As for where these characters end up, that's going to be a bit of a spoiler, so I won't get too into it, but I hope you'll like how this all pans out in the end.  I've had most of this story planned since Chapter 1, so seeing the progress I've made thirteen chapters later has been a heck of a ride. 

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2021 6:34 PM Title: Saved for a Rainy Day

I'm loving this story!! Just curious on if Duncan ever uses his shrunken harem to satisfy his sexual needs? Also would find it really hot if he shrunk/kidnapped a random accountant to help with his accounting class, or maybe goes to a bank and abducts a random banker to help with his financing class. Just food for thought. The next chapter can't come soon enough! 😁

Author's Response:

Thanks!  To answer your first question, the answer is that it's complicated. You'll actually see a bit more about it next chapter, and a lot more about it the chapter after that. So basically, the answer to that is "You'll see!" :P

 

As for your accountant idea,  that's actually a pretty cool one.  I hadn't even thought about that idea.  Maybe not for this story,  since I have most of the rest of this one already outlined,  but I might just make that into its own separate short story.  It sounds like a fun premise if you don't mind me using it. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2021 5:13 AM Title: Tests of Endurance

It's been a fort night since we've seen tinies being used to cheat on test here.

 

Well maybe not but it is seemingly an underused method of use in these stories.

Author's Response:

I thought so too.  I tried to come up with some clever ways to execute on the premise and add conflict,  and I like what I came up with!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2021 12:47 AM Title: The Big Picture

Great stuff

Author's Response:

Thank you!  We're starting to get to the juicy stuff,  so I'm pretty excited. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2021 3:39 AM Title: A Meeting of Minds

Looking forward for more

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I think you'll enjoy what I have planned!