[Report This]Date: November 23 2022 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Simply a great little story. One of my favorites regarding vore of any nature (and I've read a ton as well as written plenty).
I don't think it's mentioned, but I picture Benjamin aged around 14 or 15, especially considering his mother still helps dress him. I could picture myself at that age (though I was certainly more mature than Ben), having similar thoughts about older beautiful women in their 20s, even up into their 30s if they were athletic enough to keep in great shape. Being shrunk down to 3 to 5 inches and eaten by her. Even at a such a young age, I'm thinking it would have been a heckuva way to go.
Anyways, please continue being a great erotic writer.
Kevin
Author's Response:
Thanks Kevin, that's very kind and is a lovely motivator to write more <3
With Benjamin, yeah he's never given an explicit age. Mentally, he's certainly around 14-15 as you guessed. Awkward about sexuality, but curious. I expect he might have been able to better enjoy Madeleine's attention if he was a little bolder, she certainly wouldn't have minded if he wanted to jerk off into her mouth, but yes I'm sure he enjoyed it regardless~
Date: February 19 2021 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This was the best story I have read on here in a long, long time! High 5 Stars, You know its a great story when your Heart beat starts increasing! Thank you so much for this great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, it's always a thrill to know others are enjoying what I've written. It's always my goal to hopefully raise a reader's heartbeat (among other things <3 )
Date: February 19 2021 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
Omg, I loved it! The intimate, one on one, 'tricked' vore is my favorite. The only thing that scratches the itch more would be if she chewed him, the ultimate betrayal.
Author's Response:
Yeah any kind of betrayal of trust totally does it for me too, so she's dominating him not only physically, but emotionally too. Chewing is fun, but then it'd be over so fast. This way she gets to enjoy herself for a loooooong time as he's in her belly, waiting for her to let him out.