Reviewer: Toxenisfun Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2021 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 The View From the Bottom

For such a short story, you managed to pack so much lore and world building in! I loved every second of it, though I really hoped Tina would be the character we follow along with as she manages to survive in the harsh island she calls home. I love the world you made and do hope you consider making more chapters becuase I do see this story being a favorite of mine already! We've seen the lowest of the low on the food chain and up a few chains and I'm curious what else this island has to offer and what is considered the 'top predator'